Arshi TS : Changing Priorities - Part 3 Updated page 10 A/N on pg 9

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Sarita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Just read your note, you're most welcome :) I'm happy that you got inspired from Jadoo Hai Nasha Hai.

The end was lovely, everyone was happy, a simple act of voicing what is bothering someone can really aid in solving or prevent this situation.

Glad Arnav, Khushi and Anjali understand their priorities, things change with time and sometimes people do not realise that they too need to change their lifestyles accordingly.

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pree2605

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Superbb..

Loved d way how anjali understands arnav nd made him understand his mistake nd made him confess...

Loved it

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Superb so the teaser was the convo of the past. Finally Arnav understood Khushi 's imp and the need to express his love. Khushi also understood the reason behind Anjali and arnavs bond. Excellent.

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Nice TS!

Liked the convo between the siblings Anjali and arnav.

But I'm sorry but ArHi rship here was very forced.. She even called him "Mr Raizada". The first part however was good though. But part 2&3 didn't carry it on. Sorry if u're offended but I couldn't help it. 😊

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alwaysarshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MoonBow.
Nice TS!
Liked the convo between the siblings Anjali and arnav.

But I'm sorry but ArHi rship here was very forced.. She even called him "Mr Raizada". The first part however was good though. But part 2&3 didn't carry it on. Sorry if u're offended but I couldn't help it. 😊

I am not offended dear. Only with constructive criticism like this I will be able to improve. I did not mean to show Arshi relationship as a forced one. Even in the show, when ever Khushi is miffed with Arnav, she calls him Mr. Raizada. So it was used only in that sense.

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: alwaysarshi

I am not offended dear. Only with constructive criticism like this I will be able to improve. I did not mean to show Arshi relationship as a forced one. Even in the show, when ever Khushi is miffed with Arnav, she calls him Mr. Raizada. So it was used only in that sense.

Yeah that was what i kept thinking. but part 3, like it was more about arnav-anjali. thats not a bad thing but i didnt get enough Arhi i felt thats all. 😃

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Arilip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Beautiful story...I liked the way u ve woven the story in ignorance n misunderstanding...at times ppl do take loved one for granted n hurt them in the process...but it's important that they realise n rectify👏

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Srijanee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

I have 3 things to tell:

1. Awwiee

2. Loved it to the core...

3. I want more😆 (New stories from u pleasiee)

Please write more u are a wonderful story teller... and don't forget to PM me when u do so

Luv

Srij😳

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alwaysarshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl
I have 3 things to tell:
1. Awwiee
2. Loved it to the core...
3. I want more😆 (New stories from u pleasiee)

Please write more u are a wonderful story teller... and don't forget to PM me when u do so

Luv
Srij😳

Thank you dear😃

Will let u know when I post a new story.😊

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Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

This was a very good read and you have written this TS without essentially hurting any character of the show.. Neither offending any of the characters.. That is the beauty of this and you and you have very beautifully broached the arranged marriage concept with lack of communication. You cannot really blame Arnav. He is what, he was before marriage.. But yes Khushi did teach him a good lesson and that part of it I loved.. Really good writing :)