ArHi Drabble No. 1

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Aww this was adorable.. I wanna say Sugar, spice and every thing nice. Aww now whose side shall I take?

We have sanki in action and we have Laad Governor too.. But sanki became very spicy and yeah here I am more off a Khushi fan since though unplanned, she was the initiator. Lol usually it is hero pulling heroine and yaha we have doctor sahibaa ki twist.. like desi tadka in videshi (angrez) Arnav ki life main.. oh my I was in a boring lecture and read this.. I didn't know to laugh or smile or blush! Darm sankat mein thi..

Nanuge thumba ishta aiythu.. I just wished this was longer! Wow I love this yaar 😳

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Ahem! I love this bold Khushi... not struggling to deal with her sexual urges. If she wants her husband, she gets him. I can only imagine Arnav's grumbling turning to groans with this quirky way of waking him up in the morning. I am sure ASR is a very happy man! 😉 Keep writing girl... because you are so good at it!

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Amazing drabble.. loved it a lot.. 😃

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Hot showers. Cold showers.

Cold showers after hot showers of love. Rereading :)

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Sexy shot:) Loved it!! Do write some more drabble:)

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Its really awesome. Arnav was tricked by Khushi. Lived this avatar of Khushi

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

This was hilarious!

She definitely woke both him and junior Arnav up. 😉😆

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SwrlngElephants

@SwrlngElephants

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

What an amazing drabble. It truly gave the essence of let's-make-up-for-the-separation-ahead'.
Khushi and her sanki brain. She has so many ideas stored in her brain it amazes me. It was a simple yet enticing drabble. Depicted a happy couple relation splendidly.
By the way why was she going to Mumbai for a week? 😆😆
And wow they made up for the separation in the bathroom🤣 Only Arnav and Khushi are capable of doing something like this. Our Arnav really have a sense of punctuality.
You write very well. Just reading the first line made me see the writer in you.
I am going to read all the happily ever after Os'es. Have already read the Colored Halos. It was marvelous!
Accept my buddy request please.

Happy Jashn!

Love,
Warda

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

That was so... Endearing and sensual

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limoncello

@limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Hahaha! 😆 😲

This was awesome, Archana!

I love that scene in the show. And the way Arnav says, 'Khushi!! Tumne kapde pehne hue hai!'

When you're married and have already done 'it' a few times, you start to get more comfortable with your body and with your husband, hai na? It's a natural progression of any relationship. So this bold Khushi was such a refreshing and 'real' change! I loved it!!

Jumped his bones!! 🤣 🤪

I've noticed that such language often pops up in your writing. I have a feeling you're like me...you write like you talk! Am I right or am I right? 😃

Have you thought about writing a full fledged story? I'm sure it'll be quirky and so fun!! I haven't read something like that ever since 'Unexpectedly expected'! I'm sure yours will give that a run for its money!

Love,

Limon.