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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: cheesemad
In case i need it
Done ! :D

And I hope you do :)

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Yay can't wait for it to begin

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.brokensilence.

@.brokensilence.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Ressie

But now all i m thinking is.. SS? 4 parts hi sahi but SS? :D Not bas Cheeni, pehle OS phir TS ab SS 😃

Unres :

Interesting prologue and a completely different and new concept. This is such a sensitive topic to write on but i trust you to come up with a happy ending.

Are Khushi and Arnav divorced / living separate?

Looking forward for the first chapter.

Continue soon :D

Edited by .StarryPhoenix. - 10 years ago

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Merci for telling me about it ..better late than never 😭

DUDE THIS ONE IS FAB 👏

BRING IT ON

Khushi is the victim ...no kidding but this is a tough one ..it's TOUGH being a victim n it's tough handling one ...

I have faith in you ...go ahead and tell it YOUR way.

Love

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Okay..I'm ACTUALLY happy because I had expected an OS so an FS(four shot) is always a treat to get😆

Music and lyrics is one of my favorite story of yours

And a sequel for it was always welcomed😳...sometime in future 😉

But the New concept is awesome👏

So this is once again a sensitive Topic 😃Sensitive topics are not always means sad ending or with a lots of tissues

😆 and At the end I know their will be some kind of good message to it 😳

I trust your thinking and of course your writing..and I know all here do 😳

So anything would be good and welcoming😆

Bas abhi jaldi likho 😳

Edited by bs1224 - 10 years ago

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

O wow cheesy .. i never thought u will start something new so soon..
its a grt treat to see ... that again u are writing something and this tym .. a SS(Four Parts)..
bt i am sure ur four parts itself will rock it.. so waiting eagerly to see what now you have to make us stand on our chairs .. coz. its cheesy tho every emotion and every feeling she pen is just going to be extremely outstanding.

Now coming to the Prologue of Chaos..
o mamamam it was so painful to read that a small girl been molested and how hard was this for her to get the words out of her mouth.. its really was so painful .. haye .. it really scared me..waking an old memory of past
i remember when one of my cousin at very small age was molested by one of senior boy when she accompanied my other cousin to her school .. it was a very crucial time for all of us ..and we know how much it take us.. to get that culprit punished.. and get him rusticated from school with a red sign. TC .. but above all that was to calm my scared cousin .. who was too young that time to know everything..
I am sure this SS is also about the couple who i can imagine are not going well or are at distance from one another .. and i hope this crucial incident in their daughter's life may bring them together to secure her .. to protect her..

And once again cheesy ..the start is really intriguing..