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amoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

Fabloues ... So sad it finish ... I love it ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Lilypop,

Another beautiful story comes to an end or rather begins a new journey of togetherness :) What a roller coaster journey this has been.

Did I mention, you are one of my favorite writers now? and did I tell you I love the way you end your stories?

I will be back soon...work life is being difficult these days... Hope you will be around and give us more glimpses into life and it's complex characters and convoluted emotions :)

Take care...

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srmirji

@srmirji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Hey dear...give me sometime to my thoughts across... Daughter is ill ...but read the update couple of times...really sad that it's come to an end... Why o why...

Take care

Sri

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MarySue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Such an amazing story!

Please do write An epilogue! Would absolutely LOVE to read it! Please?

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richa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

First of all congratulations on completion of this ff .

U are a brilliant writer .

end was beautiful arshi are expecting in the end and dadi accepted them wao grt the dream was beautiful

request u for an epilogue .if not possible then start a new ff soon .

thanks for this one

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Wonderful update
Loved it
Beautifully written
Superb ending

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Lilypop,

Hope you had a wonderful Diwali :) You are missed :( I wish you come back soon :D

Cheers

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

What a messed up set of characters!!!

Arnav had started loving Khushi way before Khushi fell in love with him. It was a longer crush period for her. Haan so, Arnav loved Khushi but had solid trust issues. Our parents are our foundations. We grow up looking at them and learning from them. Arnav learnt that his mother trusted his father and only suffered, emotionally and physically. He had a hard time trusting Khushi. It took near about a decade to realise that Khushi is just not sleeping with him, she has given her heart and soul completely to him.

On the other hand, we have Aman. His father was never man enough for his mother. He grew up being neglected by the people who should have taken care of him. He only had Khushi. But Khushi also never took an interest in him as a woman would take in a man. For quite a long time, Aman was actually the only guy in Khushi's life but she never saw him that way... even when she didnt know he was gay, even when he himself didnt know he was gay. He was never man enough for her. And when they had to marry just for pretences... he knew he couldnt even fulfill her needs that she would have of her man. No wonder he broke down in abject sorrow...

It is funny how every one only thought about what is good for Khushi. Be it Vinita, Dadi, her own mother, her sister, Aman's mother, Aman, even Arnav for that matter. Khushi was a very strong character, hard-working and faithful too (Nothing like her sister, pleaseee). But she was taken the most for granted by everyone... more precisely Arnav 😡. Dil todo phir jodo! Hmpphh!

I know Khushi should have had more confidence in their love too. But as it was pointed out in the narration, no one had confidence in this relationship, even Arnav had his trust issues...

Khushi might have gotten pregnant before marriage just like Payal. But Khushi is no Payal just like Arnav isnt his father. Her dream of two kids and her husband in a summer home in the hills will definitely get fulfilled. Waise bhi subah k sapne sachh hotey hai...

PS: Somewhere during the updates you had gone on a break. The updates after that only kept increasing in typos. You write so well that it disturbed the reading more 😔

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 9 years ago