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Protective Payal

Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Friends,

this is my 2nd OS on this sweet couple Payash !!

Link to my 1st OS on Payash


Hope you like it,well this OS is for my YHA #2 OS series i will be posting the OS later in that thread .


Banner Credit : Katelyn

i just love her styling she has beautified this banner.Its really beautiful.

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It was that morning, where Aakash got up and seen his beautiful wife Ishita sleeping besides him and he said to her, Ishu get up we will go for a long drive.Ishita got happy and she got dressed and came out in beautiful saree. Ishita and Aakash sat in the car and Aakash drove the car suddenly they seen a girl asking for help.

Her eyes were swollen,her skin looked pale,her clothes were torn and it looked like as if someone molested her..she wept and she came to the window of the car and Aakash slided the window ,the lady kept her hand on his.,and Aakash felt something strange , he felt as if he knew this touch before,he was lost for a moment but when Ishita replied "Excuse me,he is my husband abd we can't help,please move away and then Aakash drove the car but he was in a dilemma,he then realized it was that lady to whom he got married to..it was not Ishita as he didn't felt the same touch being with her and catching her hand but when that lady touched him, he felt that is the same lady to whom he got married to in the "Samuhik Vivaah " where her face was covered with the gungat and his face was covered with the sehra

2 Month Back
Aakash and Ishita decided to enroll themselves in a Samuhik Vivaah , but during the Samhuhik Vivaah,Aakash's wife Ishita got exchanged with Raj's wife Payal and Aakash got married to Payal due to the confusion and when they both got separated to change their clothes Ishita seen Aakash and hugged him and Aakash took her home as he felt he married her but he felt a different feeling while doing the marriage with Payal and Payal went with Raj.Raj slept with Payal every nght and every night he used to get intimate with her and after 1 week , Raj used Payal, he married her because she was pure soul, she wont get intimate until she is married to that person .Raj sold her to one Prostitute Head

Raj said : You are now free and now you have to get intimate with every men who comes here.and he leaves from there , every day Payal has to through a lot of abdominal pian and beatings whenever she used to refuse sleeping with men .Her life is spoilt as she is now locked in the 4 walls.She tried to escape and she met the person on the road when he was going on a drive with his wife and asked for his help but due his refuse, she was sad but the Prostitute head found her and took her back

Present

Aakash goes to his room, he finds the Samuhik Vivaah marrauge certificate, in which it was given

Aakash weds Payal he was surprised to his notice and confronted his wife and Ishita held his hand

Ishita : Aakashji,go to your Payal,she needs you and you need her .She is in trouble.I am so sorry I couldn't tell you the truth that I didn't marry you but I actually married Raj.Raj and I are lovers and I told Raj that to use her and sell her to the prostitute head and I thought of ending my relationship by blaming you that you have a affair with Payal and my parents would accept Raj and my marriage as they were not willing to marry me with him cause they chosed you for me . I am sorry Aakashji I know I don't have rights to be your wife and no rights to ask forgiveness as I did a big crime .

Aakash : I didn't knew you could fall so down Ishita, I don't wanna see you face, just get lost and before that I wanna put you in jail for this reason.Ishita was arrested by the police and she didn't feel bad but happy that she was paying for her sins .

Aakash went to the Kothi and he disguised himself as a sheikh and was waiting for his turn to take Payal and make her understand about the situation and want her to be his.Payal on the other hand was worried and didn't want to go infront of the men who will select the girls whom they want to sleep with.Payal was forced to dress up and one lady comes to her.

Suchitra : Payal,don't worry dear.

Payal said to her : how should I not worry those men wants a prey and they might select me and if they select me I would be having 25th customer in this whole month, my body is not that strong now to undergo this torture.

Suchitra : Payal listen to me , you are going to your husband Aakash who married you in the Mass Marriage, it was not Raj it was Aakash who married you and he is gonna take you home and he now loves and respects you a lot.

Aakash was waiting for Payal to come out and when he seen her, he stared at her romantically.The prostitute head said "Whom would you select" Aakash said the lady in pink and he goes along with her to the room and Payal was waiting for Aakash to come and she was weeping suddenly Aakash removed his disguised look and showed her the certificate of her marriage and she was shocked and hugged him,she was weeping as if she wants to tell everything what she has gone through then

Aakash says " Shushh Payal,not a word anymore ,i came here to make you mine..- But says Payal. No if and buts you are mine,and Ishita is paying for her sins for bringing you to this state .I have fallen in love at first sight with you when you came to me for help,your touch of making me feel you need me reminded me that I married you cause we connected through souls when we married each other even our souls became one Payal.That was the touch to make me realize you are the one- Says Aakash

Payal : But Aakashji, I don't love you.How can I love you in just few moments ? I knoe you helped me and you are concerned for me . But I need time to fall for you.-Yes you can take your time too fall in love with me.But for now you need to escape from here as you will be in danger.

Aakash and Payal escapes from there and Aakash calls the police and arrests the prostitute head and their customers and frees the remaining girls who were locked there.

Suchitra says to Aakash, I hope every men are like you. But I wanted to ask you something, Will you accept Payal's baby which she is carrying in her belly ,she doesn't knoe whose baby is she carrying and plus her life is in danger,due to physical and mental torture there is complication in her pregnancy and plus she needs care and love which only you can give.

Aakash : Suchitraji,don't worry I will take care of Payal and give the child my name and give her the love and care what she needs .

Soon Payal and Aakash gets married again and on their 6th month of their marriage , she was 6th month pregnant, and she is now recovered and happy that Aakash was giving her the love and care what she wanted and then she says to Aakash.

she seen Aakash doing his office work in the laptop,Payal seen his through the mirror while dressing herself up and she goes up to him,

Payal : Aakashji I have fallen in love with you and love you very much.

Aakash : That's the best news I can receive Payal and plus I am happy to get you as my wife.Destiny has played a game in making you mine .Payal rests her head on his shoulder and Aakash feels to kiss Payal and he extends himself to smooch and he pecks her and kisses her leaving Payal blush as she bloomed :Aah says Payal and she smiled and said Look the baby also likes us romancing and they both smiled and look at each other romantically and laugh !!

Do lafz ki hai
Baat ek hi hai
Kyun darmiyaan phir ruki ruki
Keh bhi naa paayein
Reh bhi na paayein
Kyun bewajah hai, ye bebasi
Tum mein hum hain
Hum mein tum ho
Tum se hum hain
Hum se tum ho
Kismaton se milte hain do dil yahaan

Har kisi ko nahi milta
Yahan pyar zindagi mein (x2)


The END.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a beautiful story? Hate ishitha and Raj. How can they do this to payal? Feeling sad for payal.
Akash is her knight came to swept her away from the hell where she is.
Lovely sydu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An enticing story with a wonderful ending and an equally beautiful moral.
This is the first PayAsh One Shot that I've read so far and I'm glad that I did read this intriguing OS.
The One Shot took off with confusing sad beginning taking a sadistic path and finally landing with a serene ending... The entire story was mesmeric. What Raj did with Payal was inhumane but Ishita's act was shameful. I'm glad that they were put behind the bars...pleople like those deserve severe punishments.
I'll be eagerly waiting to read more of your works!!
Do write more!!

Regards
K
Edited by Anonymous_K - 10 years ago
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Protective Payal

Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anonymous_K

An enticing story with a wonderful ending and an equally beautiful moral.
This is the first PayAsh One Shot that I've read so far and I'm glad that I did read this intriguing OS.
The One Shot took off with confusing sad beginning taking a sadistic path and finally landing with a serene ending... The entire story was mesmeric. What Raj did with Payal was inhumane but Ishita's act was shameful. I'm glad that they were put behind the bars...pleople like those deserve severe punishments.
I'll be eagerly waiting to read more of your works!!
Do write more!!

Regards
K


Thanks dear for your comment .
This above link is my first payash os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting and Different OS.😊
The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.😳
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Write like this.😊
PriyaCherry.
Edited by PriyaCherry - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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❤️ 👏 ❤️ 👏

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful os
Payal suffered a lot
Akash saved payal
And punished ishita
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omggg...
This truly is very sensitive yet very true story of many girls...
People like raj still exist in todays world..they deserve the most cruel treatment in this world...
I just cant understand one thing...WHY THE GOD DAMN HELL DO PEOPLE FAIL TO UNDERSTAND THAT A NO IS A NO...WITHOUT A GIRLS WILL THEY ASK HER to sleep with soo many different men...these men are truly pigs..
How can anyone have a heart to taint an innocent soul..
This ishita is truly a bxxx...srry for bad wrds but some where this thing actually happened in my real life with some body too close to me.
When she knew that this raj was gonna get intimate her..than sell her to brothel..phir is dogi ko yeh kaise samajh me nahi aaya ki agar koi iss ke saath aisa karta to kya hota...
If I was forgiven by god n law for killing 7 people. ..people like raj n ishita would be my no 1 target for sure..
AKASH AS ALWSYS IS A SWEET HEART...god aise angel ke roop mein ladke har ladki ko de...lovely ending with an end to payals suffering. ...
Feel so relived n happy for her...
Loved payash love..AN EXAMPLE OF TRUE LOVE FOR SURE...kaash iss 21st century mein bhi aise ladke hote...
Aweesome se bhi zyada awesome update syd...my emotional state was full tu on while reading this👏👏

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