Truth about Forever NOTE page 73

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Loved the update 👏
Thank you for the pm
Eager for the next chapter

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#382

beautifully written update dear... the pain khushi is going through is unbearable.
loved seeing hatred and care both in arnav ...

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Bakergirl

@Bakergirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Omg...you have a way with words...i hate wen people are verbose just for the sake of it...but u weave magic wid words...dunno y it reminded me of my all time fav book 'The Alchemist'...wow...

Kudos

Btw d d start f d story...will follow keenly!

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Nice update.
Felt little short.
Like other writer do u have any schedule to update Like weekly once pls let us about it .
Thanks

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#385

This update was truly painful... Khushi's emotions were written so beautifully. The pains he feels with her bleak futures, the hurt she feels each time Arnav insults her... was described exceptionally well. There is so much misunderstanding in this relationship... there is hatred... yet underlying all that hateful facade is deep love. I want to know how Arnav will react when he comes to know of Khushi's current state from Shyam... and also the fact that she never cheated on him. How would Khushi react to his redemption... will be waiting to read more! 😃

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#386

tht was nice... wonder how long khushi will beable to hide form arnav

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#387

fab update

no matter how hard he tries he cant keep the hatred up

his heart always seeps through

looking forward to him finding out truth

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Awesome update. ..
Thnx for the pm. .

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#389

Brilliant and too emotional.

Khushi should discuss her illness with him or her parents p. it's their right. She wants to save them from pain but what will happen once she is gone.

Beautifully written update. Thank for update and pm.