ArHi SS: The Promises Ruin *COMPLETE* [Note + EXT TS PG113] - Page 59

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Posted: 10 years ago
Khushi and Arav have such a sweet bonding. I too want to see the drawing that he made for Khushi.
Seriously, the lack of communication is causing all the misunderstanding between Arnav and Khushi.They need to have a proper talk about the current situation.
Arnav missed the chance to hear the good news.
That was well written..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor Arav, he's such a sweet kid and Sheetal doesn't deserve to be his mother.
So, it's NK, but I doubt it too.Maybe she's not pregnant at all and has been doing it for money as she's using Arav.
Hope that things will sorted out soonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Glad that Khushi found out everything regarding Sheetal.
She had planned a lot but didn't succeed in anything.
So, Khushi met an accident, glad that both her and the baby are fine now.
Arnav was the happiest man knowing about the baby.
Well, their misunderstandings are resolved, that's great.
Loved the entire story.
That was awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Can we get Epilogue plzzz
Loved it
Khushi was grt😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really Really nice upadate.

Give a proper epilouge with their kids n all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Will read it, just found it now!😲
Then I will comment a long one😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read chapters 5, 6, and 7 in one go...people like sheetal will try to play their game in each and every given chance...knowing about the good news of becoming a father from other person would have told Arnav how much damage he has done to their relationship...she was waiting to give the good news and he screwed up everything...he gave importance to sheetal and her lies and did not confide anything on khushi...Arnav has to understand that he will not let down their love what come may...awesome ending...loved this sheetal track...loved the way you dealt with it...finally made Arnav understand what he was supposed to do and how he screwed up his life for lies...👏👏👏...beautiful ending...good luck for your exams...thanks for the PMs
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nicely written story dear:-)) just finished reading all the chapters...
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Posted: 10 years ago
J!!
Chapter 6.

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.

I so, so, simply, utterly, absolutely, love it. I actually love the way Khushi reacted. It was high-time he faced what she felt all these days. To put it in other words, he tasted his own bloody. Bitter medicine.

So, Sheetal was not even pregnant. NK was in the loop only gfor the sake of a pawn. The woman. I don't believe her. There are people like her, but this was too much.

The simplicity of the way the complicated things happened. And of course our Jasoos had to find out, fabulous. The fact that the family was herding around her, even if it was not depicted explicitly, but the way you just wound it around words, sheer brilliance.


You are a genius with words J, and I seriously love you.

N.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga123

Read chapters 5, 6, and 7 in one go...people like sheetal will try to play their game in each and every given chance...knowing about the good news of becoming a father from other person would have told Arnav how much damage he has done to their relationship...she was waiting to give the good news and he screwed up everything...he gave importance to sheetal and her lies and did not confide anything on khushi...Arnav has to understand that he will not let down their love what come may...awesome ending...loved this sheetal track...loved the way you dealt with it...finally made Arnav understand what he was supposed to do and how he screwed up his life for lies...👏👏👏...beautiful ending...good luck for your exams...thanks for the PMs



Hey!

Thanks a lot for such an insightful comment on the story. I'm glad you enjoyed and liked this take on that track.

Love
J

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