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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2
After five years
Somewhere in rajasthan
Ranawat haveli
Maithali: sumer bhaisa hv you seen rudra bhaiji.
Sumer: Bhabhisa didnt you notice I am smiling that means I hv not seen the rakshas(Devil).
Maithali: Bhaisa this is not d time for jokes. Hv you forgotten what tom is?
Sumer: sorry bhabhisa! I forgot I think rudra is on terrace. Bhabhisa but why are you so tensed bhabs will come by evening there is nothing to worry.
Maithali: That is d prob deverjisa she is nt cmng she is staying for 2 more days and if bhaisa will nt be there with her dont know what will happen.
Sumer: This is a serious prob. I'll talk to bhabs and conv her to come.
Maithali: She will nt listen you knw how much stubborn she really is.
Sumer: I knw lets find Rudra together.

Same time in Raizada Mansion
Mami: HP! OP! come fast.
Both: ji madam
Mami: ji! ji! dont you know arnav bitwa is cmng here after so mny years and you hv not set his room till now. hello hi bye bye if i m nt here then god knows what will happen to this house.
HP: woh anjli bitiya has toldvus that arnav bhaiya will live in guest room.
Mami: kya?
Anjali who has come hearing all d commotion said ji mamiji
Mami: what r u saying anjali bitya?
Anjali: hum sahi keh rahe hain mamiji hum nahi chahte chotte ke jkham phir se ubharna nahi chahte.
Mami: I understand bitya it feel like phati saree has taken all d happiness of d house with her. Dont know when everything is going to be okay. By d way has payal come home.
anjali: No mamiji ayas and ashi both wants to spend the night in gupta house so I didnt force them.
Mami: If ayas and ashi were not here I dont know how will we ever can rectify our mistakes.
Anjali: I knw if everything is normal btw our families then its bcoz of d kids. I cant say everything is fine but now we hv a hope dat one day it will be. If khushiji will be here den everything will be oky. I just hope someday we can meet her and ask for our forgiveness.
Mamiji: Tom its going to be five years after dat night we hd nt seen Khushi.

Sorry for any grammatical mistakes. Press like button if you like d story and comments are always welcome. I will update the character sketch in next update. Thank you everyone who hv liked my previous post and thank you for all your comments.
Edited by apardh_ba - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept...
I would really love to read further of this story..
By the way what is Tom?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its awesome
hopee khusi is married n happy in all senses
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no arnav no khushi!!! imagine one ipkknd episod without arshi scenes!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyaarshi

Nice concept...
I would really love to read further of this story..
By the way what is Tom?

Tom means tomorrow sorry for my shortname habit. Thank you.
Edited by apardh_ba - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

no arnav no khushi!!! imagine one ipkknd episod without arshi scenes!!!

wait for the second update u will get khushi. And for arshi u hv to wait a little longer or maybe nt depends on my mood. Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character sketch
All d characters of IPKKND are same as show
Ayas raizada
son of Payal & askash. He is shy just like his parents. loves his sister very much and he is very protective towards her.
Ashi Raizada
Daughter of Anjali Raizada. Very naughty only listen to her brother.

Sumer Ranawat
Son of Dilsher & Mohini ranawat. Loves his family. Only listen to his Bhabs.
Maithali Ranawat
Wife of Sumit Ranawat. loves her family and very protective towards her little sister(in law).
Sumit Ranawat
He is an architect. He has a construction company.
Raunaq Ranawat
He is a doctor(psych). He owns a hospital.A very cheerful person. Loves his family but if he has a secret problem goes directly to his bhabs.
Dhruv Ranawat
Son of Maithali& Sumit. Very mischevious only listens to her kakisa.
Dilsher & Mohini Ranawat
Parents of sumer, sumit and raunaq. Died in a car accident.
Bridjmohan and radha ranawat
Parents of Rudra ranawat. Brother of dilsher. Loves all d children but they hv a weak spot for their little mice.
Rudra Ranawat
Ex military officer but now is owner of the ranawat empire. He has only one weakness that is his love and for the sake of his love can do anything.
Khushi's character will reveled slowly as the story progress.
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Chapter 3
It has been five years, five bloody years since that night. That night I had became a murderer, yes I Arnav singh Raizad is a murderer because that night I have killed arnav and his khushi. But that day I have not realized what I was doing, I was filled with such a rage that had blinded me. I can still remember her face, her innocent face looks so pale. I loved her at that time and I know I still love her. But I also knew that I have lost her because my heart doesnt feel like before and this thought is enough to cut throgh my chest and to filled my heart with pain.

"Sir we are about to land. Please fasten your seat-belt." I open my eyes to look at the source who has intrupt my journey to past.
"Sir seatbelt"
"Yeah! ok! Thank you."
Finally I m here back in delhi if it was not about di's marriage I would never been here. This place reminds me of her. I know I can never be the same again because my heart is filled with guilt and regret. I dont want to meet her bcoz I know I am a coward bcoz I cant face her. I cant look in her eyes, those eyes which once upon time has love in them. I cant see the hateness in them. I wish we never meet but its not true I know I want to meet her but I dont know what I'll do once I come face to face with her.

I prepared myself to face my family. It has been a long time, a really long time.
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Chapter- 3b
Raizada Mansion

Anjali: Chotte! Finally you r here. You hv forgetten us. And look at urself you cant take care of yourself, you hv to promise me you will never leave us again.

ASR: Di! Relax take a breath. I m f9.
And he hugged anjali who is in tears. All d family members are watching the reunion of the siblings.

Mami: Hello hi bye bye! Arnav bitwa hum se bhi milo.
Akash: How r u bhai? We all hv missed you.
Arnav hugged akash and take the blessing of mami and nani.
Anjali: Chotte! come and eat something you hv become so weak.
After dinner everyone is sitting in living room.

ASR: where are the kids di.
Anjali: G..Gupta house. woh kal umm Payalji was missing her home thats why.
But arnav knows better yesterday was the day.
Arnav: Di I m tired you can call your would be fiancee tomorrow. And Di I m saying now only if I didnt approve of him you hv to forget him. Now good night everyone. Arnav said curtly and goes to the guest room.

Anjali: Hum chotte ko akela nahi chod sakte. Hume unse batt kani hogi.
Nani: No anjali bitya He hv to deal with this that was his decision and now he had to bear the consequences. I wish wherever Khushi bitya is she is happy.

Ranawat Haveli
Gayatri is talking in phone.
Gayatri: How is she? She is fine na.
Rudra: Yes
Gayatri: When you both are coming?
Rudra: Tomorrow.
Rudra cutted the call.

Radha: What happened bindani. Rudra had reached on time na. Bitiya is okay.
Gayatri: Ji Maajisa! Thank god Bhaisa had reached there I was really afraid when she had refused to come. But as soon as Rudra bhaisa had came to knoe about thos he had went to her by helicopter. Rudra bhaisa really loves her.
Radha: What's not there to love in my mishri. I hope she is okay. By the way had rohan called when this boy is coming back.
Gaytri: He has an important meeting tomorrow after that he will come.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for pm...
Lil bit confused...
Nice part
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