(Edited) One Shot | Koyi Kalma Mohabbat Ka - Page 4

it was so good.

Originally posted by: shruti46

it was so good.

the historical background .perfect setup..

looks like i really travelled in a rajputana palace.

1 ques- i m confused about idol of vishnu , i know its stupid but phir bhi , i never seen a lord vishnu idol, i have seen krishna idol not vishnu's

One of the finest pieces I have read in a long, long time.

The milieu, the ambiance, the dialogues - very aesthetically elegant! Their spoken and unspoken emotions were portrayed exquisitely! Your choice of words was beautiful!

Originally posted by: faffy

One of the finest pieces I have read in a long, long time.

The milieu, the ambiance, the dialogues - very aesthetically elegant! Their spoken and unspoken emotions were portrayed exquisitely! Your choice of words was beautiful!

it was thoroughly planned... too beautiful

No twist... no anguish... no drama

just a cute normal love story

Yar vani u write such awsum things dear... Matlab seriously dil aa gaya mera iss story pe... Such a beautiful writing dear... Rajkumari khushi and firangi babu arnav... I will never forget these two... Lovely update dear...

Originally posted by: xVanix

Urmm...i don't know

The Padmanabhaswamy temple in Trivandrum has a beautiful reclining Vishnu idol.

such a beautiful OS 😊

I liked part A more than i liked part B 😆

koi kalma mohabbat ka is one of my favorite songs 😃 and you with your writing picturized it on arshi ❤️ a big big thank you for that .

Part A .

it was soo good to read how they kept bumping into each other. And how she used to secretly eye on arnav ;-) . The OS had a beautiful " ancient " atmosphere ! 👏 girl ! you did full justice to it 😃 and ya not to forget that ''firangi babu " thingy was so cute n funny :D
and yes ! you know the best was he always found her so beautiful , in each of their encounters


Part B ..

i was actually a bit doubtful if khushi s brother will create any fuss or no .. i thought that part B will have some climax etc with fight b\w arnav n hus friend or maybe arnav ditching khushi n later coming back .. but but .. so glad that it did nt have any such stuff 😆

it was a sweet OS a very well written one 👏

p.s you write good romantic scenes ! Its very rare that I find romantic stuff "good" 😆 .. but ya .. yu hv written good .. liked it :-)

p.p.s .. did i tell you i liked it when he saw her bathing ;) & also the ankh micholi scene

p.p.p.s if only i could , i would have made a banner for this story

p.p.p.p.s sorry for unres-ing this late .