Arshi SS: The Best Birthday Gift part 6 updtd on page 8 (05.05.2015)

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Wonderful story
lovly work
plz pm me
n update soon...

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

awesome story...
liked this new concept...
so arshi having arranged marriage...
khushi waiting 4 clock to turn 12 so she could wish her prince arnavji happy birthday...
their journey from first meeting to engagement is beautifully written..
their nervousness , their eagerness, well portrayed...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...

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Khushboo Rajawat

@..khUshbOo..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

hey vini..
m also a big fan of arshi...
no need of ur apologise..
n ur pms r nt bothrng me at all..

back 2 ff
d stry was waoo.. suprb.. mndblvn..
fablous... suphrly duphrly awhesom

loved it 2 d core

beautifully & nicely penned down

i have no words 2 praise ur writng.. ur stuff & u

u r juz amagin...
keep writing
i wud luv 2 read more of ur stuff

thnxx for d pm

updt d next soon
waitn...

pm me in next if possible

keep smiling

love
Khushboo..

Edited by Nona_k - 10 years ago

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Thanks for inviting me for your story and I loved it. As you wrote this is your first attempt but to be honest I don't feel it once while reading it. Very well written dear.

I love Arnav character...he is an obedient son and ready to marry a girl choose by his parents. I loved the way you described the Sheesh Mahal, it felt that I am walking along with Khushi and Anjali. Beautifully described.

Please continue soon

Cheers for the PM.

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

I just read part 1.. Its nice :) will read next chapters tomorrow n give u my views... Thanks for pm :)

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

firstly
thanks for pm
its such a beautiful, simple lovely story
the concept of getting into arrange marriage
is simply fabulously presented by u
lived it
a different and awesome concept
beautifully written
continue soon

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

superb update! loved Sheesh mahal and Arnav's pad was out of this world.. Khushi's eagerness to know her would be husband and also the sadness as she is not able to see him till now.. waiting to see ARSHI meeting each other on their engagement.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊