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awesome...
jst loved d os...it ws really cute...
thnxx fr pm

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Dee I loved this story... It was such a sweet story
Arnav and Khushi meeting when they are children and then I live how you showed the progression of their relationship through various stages until they are finally married

I loved how you included the orphanage cause in this story. The way you mentioned how hard Armav had to work to succeed in his life and prove himself worthy of Khushi- especially to her parents was very well done - any parent would be concerned about their child's future, this was a realistic touch.

They like superhero movies?? 😆
I loved it when Khushi took the initiative and approached Arnav
The dialog - I am your Mary Jane to your Spider-Man ...
I loved it!!! That added a lighter touch to a very crucial moment in their lives yet it was so much in chracter with Arnav and Khushi as you portrayed them here. Well done!! 👏

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Deedee!! Thank you for such a cute dedication. Loved this lovely OS. A story spanning from childhood to a happily ever after is always very endearing. To see Arnav and Khushi grow up together, their friendship bond getting stronger and then eventually them falling in love. A perfect tale of over beloved couple. ❤️

Loved how cutely they enjoyed watching Batman... I love it too. Despite the differences in their background, loved how Khushi welcomed him into her family. Earlier I thought her father would be the villain for sometime, to see his darling princess fall in love with an orphan. But thankfully he wasn't. 😃

Loved the way Arnav flirted with Khushi, when they started growing up to the teenage. He was attracted to her no doubt, but idiot thought that she deserved better. I understand his insecurities but she was madly in love with him too... couldn't he see that? 😲

They grew up a little more, with their bond getting stronger. Making a career for themselves, I was glad to see that her parents had accepted their relationship too and wanted them to legalize it. Very smartly they spoke about fixing her wedding in front of Arnav, to get a reaction out of him. 😉

But I guess Arnav needed a confirmed sign from her, and I just loved the way she proposed to him... total super stuff! And then finally they were married and loved how Khushi and Arnav still visit the orphanage to spread happiness to the rest of the small kids. I guess everyone finally finds that one person who changes their lives... 😳

Dee... this is for you... bas mujhse hi!! 🤗

Awessome...
The title reminded me of title song of Jab Tak Hai Jaan...Tum se Hi jeetay raheN,,Jab tak hai Jaan...:)

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