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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Beautiful Shikhz!

Arnav woes the girl, makes her fall for him then he decides to ditch her for a job opportunity and then he regrets his decision after his realisation that he can't survive without his lady love. And Khushi who suffered for the last two months can't help but forgive him because that's who she is and because she realizes that if she prolongs this, at the end of the day she will suffer some more along with Arnav. Love your work! xo

Now let me play catch up with more of your updates and many others that I have neglected! ILY
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
beautiful OS !!! loved it..

thanks for pm 😊


A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES!!! GOD BLESS ALL AND MAY THE YEAR BE FILLED WITH HAPPINESS AND PROSPERITY FOR EVERYONE!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
This was a very warm and comprehensive OS :-) I loved the fact that both were very open about what they want and nobody did anythin out of spite

I am not comfortable with the bidding for a date. Is it common abroad?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
loved it <3
I thought u would give it sad ending n I have to go to bed with a heavy heart! :P
but u gave it a happy ending :D
the end was cute :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Awesome OS!!
Khushi's feelings when Arnav left were very well expressed!
The ending was so cute!
Great job and thank you for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Shikha you never let your readers down...that was a beautifully written OS.
Heartbreak so beautifully conveyed but i am a wee bit disappointed that khushi forgave arnav so easily...he needed to do more to earn her forgiveness.

But this was a beautifully told story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul

ShikhaKhushi,

Loved it! You have a beautiful way of expressing the emotions of your characters.



Thank you, love!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: manreet_gill

As ever a beautiful OS Shikha

The love, the heartbreak, the innocence of it all was portrayed flawlessly. I loved this flirty and slightly mischievous Arnav of yours and the eternal beauty that is Khushi.
A perfect Xmas gift that leaves you with a contented glow, perfect Shikha!
Manreet :)



Thanxoo Mannoji!!!😃 And I hope that the glow doesnt go away very quickly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

I don't know why but knowing you'll always give us a happy ending makes me wait for you to write a new OS!

Even with such simple words and even simpler story you don't fail to leave a smile on my lips at the end :)
Wonderful job! Will be looking forward to you next venture :D



😳 Hayye! Shukriya Titaliya! I hope my brains can squeeze more ideas out for you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

the worst thing in the world is to loose the loved ones for unknown reasons

and the best of all in the life time is get back the loved one knowing their regret of missing

loved it



That is so true...

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