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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Chibooo 🤗

Okay finally read it. Again. What a fun and enjoyable read! I LOVEEE your writing...

Waise toh you write all genres well, but I absolutely love how you write comedy! You never over do it and it's still so funny. Oh Aakash's poem cracked me up. The way he rhymed Payal and Ghayal 🤣 Stud!

Oh Arnav and his displeasure of Khushi wearing Night dresses 😆 cute! I loved his version of Mausam hai suhana. Hilarious. And the poem at the end was sooper romantic.

9.5. Hmm. Yes...always scope for improvement in compatibility. He he.

Love it, Helee. :*

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Loved it ⭐️

Edited by smat - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

cutest os.. awesome!!

just loved it!!

very well written.. loved the humor

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

fabulous os, enjoyed the flow of ur writing and the cute humour, very sweet and funny, loved it 😛 and congrats on ur awards, well deserved 😊

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Lovely piece of work !

Akash is so cute and his poem was too good (for his standards). I only imagine how Payalji must have blushed at that.

And the poem that ASR wrote for his wife was amazing. It justified the name of your OS and her nature perfectly. No wonder he got a 9.5/10.

Missed reading your work.

Waiting to read more. 😊

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

perfect mixture of humour, love, romance.
loved it.
p.s. i really liked akash's poem.

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Aww..
It was so sweet and cute !
Loved the poem .
Great Read !😊

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Tanya Ranjan

@tanyaranjan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

aww😊👏

beautiful os 😊👏

loved it...!!!😊👏

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

i agree with Arnav...typing is too much trouble,. A person should directly converse with the other person.

Having said that, I'm glad he took Akash's advice (?) And although the song was one we are used to listening from Khushi, it is his attempt that was endearing😳