Smitar's:Marrying Khushi#2 Part 17(1) Pg 110(19/11) Link to #3 on Pg 1

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

i must say this is one of u r most humours FF series made me laugh loudly

my team thinks i have gone bonkers

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Ranjitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

wonderful update...

very nice!

hope arnav will be able to convince khushi to come back for work...!
otherwise how can he woo her?

and his actions is surely driving her insane and away from him for sure...

continue soon...

thanks for the email

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

it was an awesum dawsum update ...i really want to thank d writer as she has made my unsaid wish true ...all of d tym i wanted a truely resisting khushi ...jis k lie asr ko sahi lafzon mn pappad bailnay paren ...but it remained in my heart as most of d story has arnav khushi sparks in der first meet ..dis is d first tym i feel dat pappad bailnay wala scene is cuming true ...thank u smita ..and thank u rulama

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Just caught up with chapters 11 and 12.

Poor Khushi had a restless night thinking about the Diliwala Khadoos. She knew he was going to haunt her dreams and tried as much as she could to avoid sleeping. She's hilarious 😆

"My face is not a municipal corporation road for you to travel along it as and when you please!" 🤣

ASR managed to get his chumban 😆 But him chasing Khushi will be something his family/friends will not let him live it down ever 😆

But Khushi is definitely a unique piece, made only for Arnav. The latter just has to realize that his woman needs to hear sweet nothings 😳

I wonder how he'll bring her back!

Loved it Smita ji!! =D Looking forward to the next update!

Thank you for the emails Rashmi! :)

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Arshifan4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Fantastic update Khushi is just superb

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sphobic

@sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Hey Devi Maiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Smita di!!!!!!! that was an fantastic update...actually fantastic is a small word i dont have any proper word to describe the update...you are just superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If you try something with me, kheenchke kaan ke neeche maaroongi. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 i can't imagine someone telling this to Mr. ASR...🤣

tsk tsk Raizada!!! kitna Samjhate hai par ye hai ki Samajhta hi nahi... ab bhugto...

you stole our Jalebi queen's THE KISS... you are so gone!

Lo Bhaga diya Khushi ko apni harkato ki wajah se...now lets see what he will come up with...

Smita di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please please please!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i screamed so loudly...aapko awaaz aayi ki nahi????😆

Love!!!

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vishruta

@vishruta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

awesome update

lovely as always

please update the next part soon

it is always a joy reading your works

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Mystery Girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

hilarious update...🤣...loved it ...update soon...

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chaitali

@chaitali12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Their fight was hilarious 🤣

Arnav kissed her again. .n she's like. ..she's not his dilliwali girlfriend ..

"You Laad Governaar! How dare you touch me? Who
do you think you are?" Khushi began.
"Arnav Singh Raizada." ASR stood straight and tall,
trying to impress her with his imposing figure.
She was not in the least impressed.
"Aap Arnav Singh Raizada honge apne ghar me,
apne kapde ke dukaan me, apne Dilli-Billi mein, but
not in my Lucknow, not to me." she declared, giving
reason a good miss.
ASR straightened his lips that had a tendency to curve
in to a smile in her presence. "I am Arnav Singh
Raizada everywhere." he said simply. 🤣

I loved this. .
"To..." she lowered her lashes, lifted them, and tried
to avoid his eyes. "...to give chumban on my palm...
or my cheek?" she managed to speak through her
frozen throat.
"To give what?" ASR asked. "Chumban? What is
that?" His eyes twinkled. 🤣

chumban 😲 😆

the jalebi bai of lukhnw will give "chumban" to her patidev only..

oops. .raizada seems to have messed up everything. .
now what ??

it was a lovely update. .

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shona-li

@shona-li

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Omg this is one of the most hilarious updates I've ever read! You've really captured Khushi's essence in your story. Lol at her witty rejoinders...separating Arnav, Singh and Raizada! 😆. There wasn't a line I didn't laugh at. Loved ittt!