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Posted: 11 years ago
So the denouement happened.
Arnav's mom and dad didn't commit suicide but became victim of covetous chachaji. it's not only the covet but his deep rooted loathe and jealousy made him commit such heinous crime. No wonder why Shyam associated with him. Both are atrocious pervert.
Chachaji blurted out everything in front of Arnav. But why he confessed all of a sudden? If he wouldn't say nobody would ever know the real story of the quadruple murder. Is he a human or demon? He not only took four lives but destroyed their children's life. Khushi was fortunate that she got mother like masi and dad like babuji. But Arnav became completely wretched.
I'm anxious now, how Arnav behaves with Khushi after knowing about his dad and Khushi's mom's affair.
the pink part was cute. So grumpy raizada loved Khushi's idea to decorate his laptop and cake and adorning him with pink and blue flower?😆 no wonder why he fall in love with her?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres here

Sorry for taking so long.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

So the denouement happened.

Arnav's mom and dad didn't commit suicide but became victim of covetous chachaji. it's not only the covet but his deep rooted loathe and jealousy made him commit such heinous crime. No wonder why Shyam associated with him. Both are atrocious pervert.
Chachaji blurted out everything in front of Arnav. But why he confessed all of a sudden? If he wouldn't say nobody would ever know the real story of the quadruple murder. Is he a human or demon? He not only took four lives but destroyed their children's life. Khushi was fortunate that she got mother like masi and dad like babuji. But Arnav became completely wretched.
I'm anxious now, how Arnav behaves with Khushi after knowing about his dad and Khushi's mom's affair.
the pink part was cute. So grumpy raizada loved Khushi's idea to decorate his laptop and cake and adorning him with pink and blue flower?😆 no wonder why he fall in love with her?


ha ha, sohara, he was so mad at her for saying all that pink blue stuff then gort almost taken in by her laptop decoration idea... but often do very shatir men fall like a tonne of bricks and go a little silly in the head... thank g for that.

yes, denouement... at least of sheeshmahal...

chacha ji is terrible... there is a seething rage, jealousy, anger, hatred, pure rottenness in him. his impotence ignites a plane in him that perhaps just not being his mother's favourite would not have.

he is revealing things for a reason, just as shyam is hanging around for a reason too...

i am planning the next chapter, hope i get it right.

asr and khushi... i am waiting to see what happens there as a result of this venom.

they are before the cold blooded murderer of their parents who is almost making fun of the people he killed. think asr will remain cool or khushi?

let's see.

and if you missed things you like in this chapter, please do read the ncofl update... okay?
Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rk2127

Edited.

Hey sorry for keeping it Unres for long. no problem 😊


AD with all my exams and deadlines got the better of me. poor thing, hope exams good

But here I am read the update finally and enjoyed thoroughly. Especially, Arnav with pink and blue flowers 😃. ha ha he'd look cute, wouln't he...

Oh well Khushi's imagination can be really infectious like her smile that Arnav too imagined himself like that. And just the thought of his Khushi and her craziness put a smile on his face in such crucial moment and a doubt in the mind of his versed enemies about their plans.

This all was a game for Arnav chachaji to be loved and appreciated by his mother. absolutely, and i think his mother played games too... and finally it became him.. he just played no matter what getting more and more rotten along the way.

Yes such people do exist and they are result of mere negligence and more attention to one sibling than other, jealousy and obsession. One mistake and the huge priced paid by 4 souls now dead and Arnav and Khushi reeling in the aftermath since they know the full truth now. this was the crux of it for me, while masala for masala's sake is fun, i couldn't make light of that terrible sadness in asr's heart or that too bright sparkle in kkg's eyes... for their sake i had to find a believable cause... and, rk, too many people like chacha ji and shyam actually exist in this world. for the slightest grievance: a mother who wasn't that fair or an affair they plan to have or some imagined slight or a little bigger share in the property or whatever they actually kill people. even justify it.

Question is how will it affect their relation going forward. But I trust ASR, he said he is not leaving this place loosing, not this time. This time he will win and I really wish for his and Khushi's win, their loves win.


such a lovely moving comment, rk.

please don't apologise for being late... chalta hai.. ad is more important. that anyone comments at all i am grateful.

yes, you are right, he has not come here to lose this time. dealmaker.

some comments in blue above.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52


ha ha, sohara, he was so mad at her for saying all that pink blue stuff then gort almost taken in by her laptop decoration idea... but often do very shatir men fall like a tonne of bricks and go a little silly in the head... thank g for that.

yes, denouement... at;least of sheeshmahal...

chacha ji is terrible... there is a seething rage, jealousy, anger, hatred, pure rottenness in him. his impotence ignites a plane in him that perhaps just not being his mother's favourite would not have.

he is revealing things for a reason, just as shyam is hanging around for a reason too...

i am planning the next chapter, hope i get it right.

asr and khushi... i am waiting to see what happens there as a result of this venom.

they are before the cold blooded murderer of their parents who s almost making fn of the people he killed. think asr will remain cool or khushi?

let's see.

and if you missed things you like in this chapter, please do read the ncofl update... okay?


got your PM, gonna read it tonight. The study load is a bit less this week, so I think I can.
Barun fulfilled Khushi's wish to put flower on ASR's hair. I think you have seen the segment, where Sanaya put a flower in Barun's hair. She was clapping like a child and Barun was making funny expression. If I find the segment, I'll PM you.
Edited by sohara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^^
😃 what a reminder, sohara, yes, vaguely remember them gambolling, please do send... so much studies... i feel bad for you. take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^^
thanks, anita,

and it is great to see you. 😳 take care, hope life gets a little less hectic soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
A wonderful update. loved the flashback. thinking of khushi's laughter itself brought smile on arnav's face. Khushi is such a crazy girl who make others happy. So the past is revealed and Arnav now knew that who is behind his and khushi's parents death. Hope they both will get out of here safe. but after taking revenge on his chachaji. Thanks for the super update and the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sskaug25

A wonderful update. loved the flashback. thinking of khushi's laughter itself brought smile on arnav's face. Khushi is such a crazy girl who make others happy. So the past is revealed and Arnav now knew that who is behind his and khushi's parents death. Hope they both will get out of here safe. but after taking revenge on his chachaji. Thanks for the super update and the pm.



thanks so much, sskaug...

i hope to find my way through this mess and pray i don't turn it into a bad hindi movie along the way. 😳 tough point in life... see you soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Am back with more comments..
The flashback scene was really sweet.. "and how come she knew what he liked and didn't like. " .. Khushi just knew him instinctively from the beginning didn't she? He could get as rude as he wanted.. rip her dori, drop her from first floor, make her stand in the rain, send her to a ruined building about to fall and she would still remember to turn back for that last lingering look and feel safest in his arms holding on to his shirt.. I keep forgetting this is your story and not really the show! When they heard each others voice on the phone it made them feel alive again. And then at the end the gust of wind.. they could actually feel each others presence. lovely!

A Very well woven out background tale of the elder generation. Their haunting past merged into the present. Poor Arnav that he has to hear all this from the detestable chachaji. Your chachaji's character is a bad sick villain 😡 . I can almost imagine a 14year old boy inside this 27 year old man standing helpless listening to this blasphemy against his mother. It is intense the way you capture the agony he is enduring Indi di. "there is no or else...i will kill you," asr said it simply, and there was no doubt he meant it." Actually seeing Arnav in this deadly mood was exhilarating in a way. Both the villains are surely heading towards their reckoning..
Edited by aarwen - 11 years ago

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