arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: anonyasr
Lovely chapter. Great writing. Like the way nainital is woven into the story.

thanks, anonyasr... i somehow felt that nainitaal needed to be revisited. something left there still. glad you liked.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: rk2127
Nice update.
How lovely, Arnav took khushi to the Shaba where it all started. Where they were labeled as lovers and runaway bride & groom. 😳

But why oh why...Shyam is still active with all his venom... Gosh 😡

hi rk,

so you liked the return to dhaba? i am glad. sorry to bring back shyamwa, but he was hissing and restless, had to bring him out a bit. 😆

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Updated comment

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97756600

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Super Fantabulous Update Di...
Arnav n Khushi's moment was really wonderful n its was beautifully written by you.
Anjali is a great person n she really deserves the best.
I wonder whats in store for Arshi bt long as Khushi and Arnav are together they can tackle any situation.

Looking forward the next update.,
Thanks for the Pm

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.Brooke.

@.Brooke.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Fabulous update.So lovely that he decided to go to that dhabba for their honeymoon.Beautifully written scene.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Indi😊👏

Ok so you took them to Dhaba for their honey moon on your Anniversary...interesting 😊.but in between there ,the chat of Khushi with Lakhmiji is quiet interesting and has something for me...I don't know you had a thought process behind that or just wanted to spice it up with that but either way you had set up a channel through which a lot of things can pass through to get the climax of this story ...

I look it as

(see, lakshmi ji, you should understand that nani ji loves you a lot. it's not as though there's no one else in the world for her to love... there are so many big dogs... like our gomti sadan's bhola... oh our neighbour's dog was soemthing... then you know how people love cats, and birds? have you seen the film which had the kabootar ja ja ja song... oooph... what can't pigeons do, it was salman ji's first film... but what i want to tell you is this... don't run off here and there the way you do, nani ji gets terribly worried. she loves you so much, lakshmi ji! do you understand?)

Yes For Nani, her Naati is the one she holds so close...and her Love , her Lakhmi meaning wealth and extent of her love , her daughter is in him...then how can he look away from this reality that he has to keep his family always up front and his own love which is rooted in his Nani is ready to embrace that Gomti...river which is joined to Ganga...meaning pures you, cleans your all doubts , sins and all...he has to come out of his dark path of his to join hands with this light ...purity, kabootar...peace messenger...as he is feeling peace there just standing there for listening this Khushi talk to a goat...a goat again gives milk a mother...who was his peace and she lefyt him in this darkness where he is preferring to stand and has a fear to turn on this light so this peace won't slip away...

Their love doesn't need that much of intimacy but the heat of it burns both of them whenever they are close...

Last but not the least...You have to bring Shyam again...😡 seriously..

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

What a lovely way to replace her bad memories by making new ones. Now she will always look back at that with a smile. He has made sure that he erases the unpleasant memory in such a sweet way.

We make the biggest decisions of our lives in seconds and Arnav's decision of marrying Khushi is a proof of it. Her presence provides him with much needed peace and comfort. She is very basic and natural and he needed someone real like her. He would have been a fool to let her go.

In a moment like this, his concern for his sister shows what a complete man he is. Gives importance to each relationship. Khushi should be given credit too for she has given him the space to do so.

Oh no, the evil man is back =/

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Awesome update as usual. Can never get enough of this ff. planning to read it again from start soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

thanks for the PM

Its always heavenly to cuddle into loved ones arms at the end of the tiring day and ASR is blessed and he himself is amused how it could it happen to him..sigh..

the feeling itself is nice and you revisited the nainital scene with utmost serenity.

and you brought shyam back...buckling up to withstand the storm