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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This is a class apart and I don't think I would be exaggerating in saying that IF FF section hasn't seen poetry of this calibre. Keep this going...I know this is great...I'm tempted to say this is perfect but I know better things are on their way ...loved it

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The love, longing, desperation and frustration all came out so well.

Beautiful.

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

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You are poet...what words...amazing!

Loved it!

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It was beautiful, Del.

You write so well, be it prose or poetry.

Loved it.

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_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

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If i could explain myself better

I would write you a poem

If i could find the right words to say

I would write you a letter

All i say now is heartfelt thank you

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Oh Madam Shakespeare you had me at the first line of this Out Standing piece.

I haven't seen a more beautiful version of remorse and redemption ever!

IF completing tests inspire you to write stuff like this then I would say you should come here and write each time you complete a test!😆

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Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This was lovely. You've brought out his feelings so well with help of only a handful of words.

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greenMoss

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Just for lack of better words, I can only say-

This is awesome.

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greenMoss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#9

His (or rather your) words of redemption are intoxicating.

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Pavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

beautifulll...

u sooth me wid ur words...

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