Little Red Flower -Thread One- Chapter 1 to 8 - Page 58

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Finally update:D

I missed you so much JJ. You are a rockstar:D

Okay now coming to the update, it was beautifully written.

That confession was beautiful. Poor Khushi. After reading that confession, I feel like killing ASR, his one decision changed everyone's life. I feel bad for that little girl. I know Khushi is doing great job, she is Cammy's mother and father both still I feel if Arnav had not taken that wrong decision, thing would have been different for their kid.

Aww she want her mother to smile always. Of course she sounds like her Dad. Though I feel Arnav doesn't deserve any chance (If there is not any other truth behind his callous behavior that night) but Khushi deserves and for herself and Cammy, Khushi should forgive him.

Love u JJ<3

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

That was quite a painful and emotional update,

However I loved reading the update from khushi's point of view,

The flash backs was so sad and you wrote down khushi's pain, anguish and feelings perfectly since she left Arnav.

Awww the part where Khushi broke down and chaahat asking her not too cry again was so sad,

The update was a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM xx

Originally posted by: --sree--

awesone :) glad to see it updated after long time...and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

i simply love khushi's and chahat's relation...u have beautifully framed their relation and character and i just hope that arnav right every wrong he did..

loved the update thanks for pm :)

Originally posted by: slakhani

wow, that was very emotional. thank God for the little mercy aka NK:) I'm sure we will have some lighter moments in next update with him back now. I can't wait for him to meet Chaahat! Please update soon:)

Thanks

Sony

Originally posted by: ara_000

welcum back bhagwaanji 🤗

nd wat a start of d chappy 👏

emotional indeed nd trust me now i really need a funny shot from u to cheer me up 😉

chahat is really one cute kid who knws how to make evryone love her..!

Being a single mother khushi has faced a lot in her life nd chahat knws it well dat her nly source of love is her mom nd the way she made promise was beautiful..!

I loved it how u have written evry small thing clearing it dat all happened aftr dat bachelor's party night..!

Arnav,damn this man never fails to made me feel sorry for him though he is totally at fault..!

Nd i truly believe dat he needs a chance nd me sure khushi wll give it a chance coz chahat needs it nd she knws it well..!

Khushi is capable of giving her evrythng but father's love is sumthng which evry child should get nd khushi knwing dis will deffo let arnav a secnd chance..!

Beautiful chappy 👏

loved it totally ❤️

Originally posted by: .Nightingale...

This chapter was really awesome! Got to know a lot about the flashback, which i was eager to know about!
And I love Cammy, she is such a cutie-pie!Always cheers up her mumma! She has so much of ASRish characteristics in her!
What is ASR planning now?😕
Eager to read more!

Originally posted by: _Devaki_

Read the whole parts in a go!..You are an awesome writer..
I want to read more on this "mission wooing Khushi"😃
Please PM me when you update 😃

PS:Iam also a malayalee😳

Originally posted by: kajribarunsobti

I cried S-ji
I swear s-ji I cried... ur story sometimes transfer me into another world

As I hav already said that I cant blame Arnav fully but yes... he deserves to suffer... coz when I read it today that she had waited till morning... that mean Arnav is her culprit

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

Khushi's POV was beautifully potrayed. Was that all written in the diary?And Arnav had been crying by reading it??
I knew that it was something related to their inter-connected past that made Arnav back off from the marriage and Khushi was left all alone at the altar.But whatever reason might have been,Arnav didn't fulfill his promise to never leave her.Khushi trusted him so had submitted herself to him with any fore thought.But he didn't come.
The sister came as a gaurdian angel in her life, she became her help and support.Khushi is glad to have her in life.
Chahaat, this little girl amazes me yet again.She's herself fighting with the inner turmoil but is consoling her mother. This little girl is truly an angel.
Arnav wants forgiveness but Khushi isn't ready to hear him out.And why would she?He's the one at fault.She has faced so much by herself, so thoda bahot time toh lagega hi..hain na?
Loved the update..<3