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Nidhi Nevatia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Hey i dont read minds ! Its just your way of writing that gets me to keep my thinking cap on and then decide what might or might not happen and then comment !

This update was fabulous ! The pain in Arnav's and Khushi's heart came out like a downpour. The skies darkened and as soon as Khushi left, it started raining along with Arnav bursting out crying.

Chaahat saw the fight between Arnav and Khushi and was speechless. Poor kid, though far matured for her age, how much can she take ?

Arnav atlast learnt his mathematics, calculating atleast ! All thanks to the sisters of the convent ! This time round Chaahat again heard Arnav talk, but was hurt that he didnt know of her existance and that she, Chaahat, was his daughter. That was the last resort. She ran from there near Khushi the skies as though crying out her emotions !

Too much for a small girl to handle and that too when the dreams and heart are broken by the very same person of whom she dreamt of a happy relationship ever after of a father and daughter ! According to her ... No Happy Endings !

Hey Bhagwan ! Wont Arnav ever stop saying... Jab main tumse baat kar raha hoon toh palat kar mat jaao ?? ... But this time round he got an answer for that from Khushi ...Haan hum mooh palat kar aapke saamne se yahaan se jaa rahe hain..!!!! Again Arnav stop saying patent dialogues *hits head on wall*... Tum achhi tarah janti ho main kya kar sakta hoon ! ...

Khushi knew that Arnav's people were on the look out for her and were keeping an eye on her ! She told Arnav to tell them to back off so that she and her daughter could live in peace !

Hoping Arnav will tell his side of the story to the sisters and after putting the whole thing together, the sisters might take time to see his determination of getting Khushi n Chaahat back in his life, mending his faults, and might just come forward to help Arnav after he passes their test and then get Khushi back ! Just a wild guess though !

Waiting now... Intezaar kar rahe hain... Kya hoga ! Kya Khushi ek baar phir baat karne ke liye Arnav se milegi, kya Chaahat apne pitaji se milna chahegi...hum wait kar rahe hain !!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Wow the update was quite emotional, painful and heart breaking.

The confrontation between Arnav and Khushi was as expected quite intense and emotional.

Everything Khushi said from her point of view was spot on, I'm glad she spoke to Arnav in that expressionless manner.

Awww poor chaahat witnessed that awakard moment between Khushi and Arnav,

It was sad when Arnav broke down but he does deserve it, he will have too work really hard to repent and regret everything he put khushi through.

I am glad Arnav has figured out that chaahat is his daughter,

The last part was so sad when chaahat made her emotional declaration to God about not wanting her father in her life.

The update was a brilliant read and written exceptionally well.

Thanks for the PM,

Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the next part xx

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Asrkkgsr

@Asrkkgsr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

heart wrenching part.khushis pain and arnav s pain was purly describe in it.chaat is a strlng girl.what will arnav do now?

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Thnx for d pm.

Welcome back!!

I m so happy tht my comment make u happy n grin like an idiot to be precise as u put it.

It made me wonder wht did i write since i m nt IF literate yet dnt knw how to go back to my comment n check.

Bt nevertheless wht point did i raise tht wud ans in Ch 5 coz i have forgotten which hppns at times i m sure will remember later.

Now for the updt.

Brilliant updt.

Arnav n khushi's confrontation was really intense.

Armav too shocked to see a different yet indifferent n cold khushi.

Her outburst after Arnav asked her for sometime tht she waited the whole night n her painful account of tht night ws really emotional.

Arnav tried to refute tht he cudnt possibly chose his past over her met with defiance.

Khushi told him very coldly tht she does nt trust him since he broke the promise.

Arnav is so broken or as in the past his brain hs gone for a holiday. he actually asked khushi if she hd a daughter n did she marry.

No wonder khushi gt furious n said she dnt owe his explanation. it ws like d repeat of the scene on the bridge bt this time even more curt n cold.

Earlier when she dint step back n told him his old school rules will nt work n she'll nt do wht he wants hd Arnav almost leave her bt after this he came back to his ASR style n used his tactic to corner by 1st sayin ' dnt u turn away when i m talking to u' n khushi 's retort ' yes m turnin away wht will u do ' met with the same response he held her wrist n turned it on her back n pulled her to him sayin she's answerable to him n bt she coldly took his hand off her. it ws almost rabba ve the one when she refuses to accept him as her husband.

However unlike the past this time they have an audience their daughter who Arnav hs no idea yet bt is sheerly heartbroken.

Khushi left citing her daughter sayin she wnt believe his wrds this time. it probably must have been the most painful heart wrenchin moment for chahat to see her father whom she met n spend time with hd no idea n reality came crashing when all her dreams n hopes revolving around her father were shattered.

Arnav's pain seeing them leave ws touching n looking at his engagement ring ws emotional.

Poor guy life hs been unfair when it comes to relationships for him. Even the love he felt played him 1st coz of his past n every time he suffered like a lost boy to feel loved.

The nun frm the church took him in only to tell him the truth abt khushi which struck him finally like a bullet tht chahat cud be no is his daughter .

He saw the diary with stars only to call out Chahat bt she ran off. i'd like to knw how he gt tht diary.

Tht kid whose so cute adorable is so shattered tht she actually prayed to god tht once her dad acknowledges tht she's his daughter she'll no longer ask for her dad to be with her or dream or tht coz she knws her reality tht she's nt priviledged like other girls she hd to grow up soon.

Bt the most heart wrenching thng is tht Arnav n khushi who lost their parents n yearned for the love of their parents n this one thng tht ws a common denominator which broke the ice bet them n the very 1st time tht made ASR turn into arnav to apologize to khushi. the same thng tht they talked abt their parents at the farm house again becoming close drove them apart.

The aftermath of tht is even their daughter ws deprived of a father the love n care of her both parents n sense of belonging having no family except her mom. Bt unlike ASR's mom Khushi is strong Arnav however did worse thn his father by abandoning his wife if thts wht hppnd since it seems frm his behavior tht he dint intend it.

Waiting for the nxt updt.