ArHi OS : Another Day | Sequel to One More Day

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

u really made me tear up...that was heart wrenching :(

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

jeez! dont laugh, but it was kinda creepy and gave me goosebumps while i was imagining such a possibility...knhushi dead, arnav alone.. *shudders*

i wonder how u managed to pen it down...!

gr8 job!

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

That was sad
But loved the update
Thanks for the pm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

well ASR you were given second chance but you left it
god that was more worse that the first one
okay by that i dont mean the writing
but that it made me cry more
well all is over now
she will never come back to you

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Thank you so much for writing a sequel,

The first one shot you wrote was so heart breaking, I was thinking she might have survived.

It's such a shame Arnav only has her memories and the fighting, teasing, flirting and beautiful moments they spent together to remember her with now.

Honestly the sequel was so emotional, it bought several tears to my eye (here was me thinking only your story "Free" could reduce me too tears).

It's so sad when he was thinking that Khushi had died thinking that he did not love her.

A beautiful piece of writing, written exceptionally well.

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Emotional one.made me cry...😭

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

aww..sad one. .
I smiled initially. .later..I was in tears. .

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Awesome <3
Loved it <3 ❤️

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Such a beautiful OS. So poignant !

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

This made me Cry...Awesome

Very well written

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