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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful Ideaadd me on fb plz https://www.facebook.com/neeraj.kumar.79025
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow realy nice..
Plz cntinue..
All writers r just awsome..
Cngrats guyz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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veryyy nyc idea
i thot readers r nt supposed to comment
loved it
nyc story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome deeps..!!!!!
w8ng for the next part..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! that was awesome yaar
loved it so far
all the best dj😉
coint. soon n do lemme know plzz😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Nice game...

but i'm... ahh forget

Deep Di and all other Writers... really a good job...

i'm eagerly waiting for the next part..

Deep di thanks for the PM😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
m so completely lost right now!😆

but it's a good one,this idea n everyone's contribution...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1 by Tabby.J -

"Is the job done?"

"Its done Sir but there is a problem."

"You idiot can you not stay out of trouble! What is it now?"

"Sir.. the girls very noisy and... and the guy keeps scolding her, they haven't even had an introduction yet. Gupta Sir will be so mad at us if this mission goes wrong."

"This is not my headache, Gupta Sir thinks this way is the best to deal with the matter. You just shut the crap up and do what you are paid for."

The call was disconnected by the very angry man on the other side. Poor kidnapper, he thought this job would be an easy one. Kidnap two strangers, put them in a room together and let them be BUT princess Gupta had a voice louder than any woofer of a branded car and opposite her sat the worlds most annoying, irritated and intolerant man. The ASR!

Why are these two kidnapped?

Why are they brought into the posh-est farm house of Manali?

What is Guptas purpose behind all this?

NO BODY KNOWS!!


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Part 2 by Titaliya_AP -


"Gupta! Come on let's just do this and get it over with, god damnit!" Arnav grabbed her by the shoulders towering over her.

"No! I don't want to!" Khushi shoved against his chest, struggling. "And especially not with you!"

Letting go, Arnav ran frustrated hands through his hair as he muttered, "It's not like this was my choice either! But now that I'm here I might as well--"

"Might as well not! Stay away from me Raizada!" Khushi completed, shouting at the top of her lungs.

Turning around and grabbing her again, Arnav tried reasoning with her this time, "Come on, Gupta! It's not that bad! It's actually not that painful once you start doing it! Just try for gods' sake!"

"But... I've never... I mean... This is all new and--" Khushi lips quivered as she spoke.

But Arnav quickly shushed her as he led her over to the one table in the middle of the room. After making sure she was comfortable, Arnav leaned forward and promised, "It's just chemistry, Khushi. It's not hard and I'm here to tutor you. I promise to take this slow and easy. It'll all make sense soon."

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Part 3 by Deepthiya


"Can't do this, definitely not with you, get off of me!" Khushi tried to push him away getting up from the table.


"Just shut up and do as I say!" Arnav bullied her pointing his finger at her and pushed her back onto the table.

"I won't..."Khushi tried to fight with all her might only to be shushed by Arnav. Arnav covered her mouth with his palm and warned "Shhh, someone is approaching us" He ran towards the door entrance and peeped through the key hole.

Arnav thought for a brief moment and strode back to Khushi "Open your arms and spread your legs" He commanded panting heavily.

"What? Are you nuts?" Khushi crossed her arms protectively over her chest. Arnav rolled his eyes exasperated and swiftly opened her arms pulling her into bone crushing hug.

"Leave me, what are you doing?" She resisted.

"Stop screaming! Don't think I am dying to do this with you. I have better options than you Ms. Gupta. I cant sit here looking at your pathetic face all my life. That sicko is coming, you better co-operate, if you dont want to get munched on like piece of tobacco by him" He whispered sternly.

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Part 4 by momo121


Khushi closed her eyes and waited for the pain to hit her, but nothing happened. Khushi opened her eyes and saw Arnav on top of her handling with a key of a door.

Khushi," why are not doing anything? And is that a key?? Where did u get a key??"

Arnav heard the door click open and Arnav said to Khushi,

Arnav," I always have keys in my pocket... just in case I get locked up somewhere."

Khushi was about to say something in return when she felt someone grab her arms and pulled her away from Arnav. Khushi screamed and then suddenly heard Arnav gasp.

Arnav (to the kidnapper assistant)," YOU! What are you doing here??"

Kidnapper assistant," To recuse you Arnav of course dumbo!"

Arnav," What? Then what about her?"

Arnav said pointing at Khushi

Kidnapper assistant looked at Khushi and then at Arnav and said,

Kidnapper assistant," I came only for you.. not that girl."

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Part 5 by Anjori


Arnav stared at the Kidnapper assistant in disbelief for a minute and then replied, "I'm not going anywhere without her"

Kidnapper assistant,"but I can't take her with me"

Arnav,"and why so ?"

Kidnapper assistant"because I'm ordered only to take you not her"

Arnav was now loosing his cool, he tried to be calm and replied"I just said that I won't leave without khushi, and that's final. Now do whatever you want to"

Kidnapper assistant,"I'm not listening this bullshit anymore. You are coming with me or I would have to call the other men to take you away"

Arnav, "just get the hell out of here"

Till this time khushi was silent but then mustering up some courage she spoke to arnav

Khushi,"please leave, don't bother about me. I'll be fine"

Arnav turned towards Khushi and anger was clearly visible on his face.

Arnav, "how many times do I have to repeat that ... "

A voice from behind the kidnapper assistant " you woudn't leave without khushi. Is that right ?"

Arnav,"now who the f**king hell are you? Wasn't one enough?"

Voice, "well, I guess no"

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Part 6 by Tabby.J -


Shyam Singh Raizada.

Arnavs elder brother and Anjalis ex boyfriend. A little intro on Anjali, Anjali Gupta is Khushi Kumari Guptas elder sister, 19 years old and irrevocably in love with the playboy of their college Shyam.

When Shyam had offered his brothers help to Khushi she had outright refused saying she did not want to be tutored by the playboys brother who would be a brute himself. And hence her refusal had cost them this kidnapping which was done by none other than Shyam himself.

"Little brother, its time to go home now, moms searching for you and Mrs Gupta it at our door accusing us of kidnapping. To make things better I believe you two travel home in different cars. Now get moving..."

"You don't get to order me Shyam, I know what to do and what not to! Im taking Khushi with me and that's final. You kidnapped us because her refusal hurt your manly ego however I know how to own upto my mistake and yours too."

Damn that's some retaliation - Khushi thought.

Her sisters ex might be a jerk but her brother was sure the opposite. When she had seen Shyam her 15 year old mind had registered few facts and she knew she was alone once Arnav left but now she felt good and protected.

That evening Arnav and Khushi arrived the Raizada mansion together, with Arnav profusely apologizing for his brothers doings and Anjali defending Shyam that he was only trying to help. That evening even witnessed a true friendship bond being formed between a 15 year old and 17 year old, an age when mostly the elders avoid the younger ones, Khushi found her support .

Now after 10 years she was thinking if she was wrong about her judgment because Arnav Singh Raizada had outright refused to leave the side of Mr. Mithals daughter who had come to attend their siblings wedding. Sure she had grown accustomed to being the only girl around Arnav and this new change was surely not welcomed.

"What?" Arnav asked her. When he finally managed to get the fevicol removed from his arm who was none other than Ani, Mr. Mithals daughter, he had ran back to Khushi so he could get some piece of mind but now Khushis attitude really confused him.

"Like brother, like brother!"

"What! That doesn't even make sense Khush... what are you-" but before he could complete his sentence Khushi had walked passed him huffing and puffing.

Was that jealousy I smell - thought Arnav.

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Part 7 by Deepthiya


He walked behind her following her to the terrace. He leaned against the parapet wall while she stared blank at the buzzing streets.

"I see smoke all over here" He teased relishing her huffs and puffs.

She rolled her eyes and gave him threatening look.

He came and stood closer to her and whispered in her ears. "By the way what do you think about Ani. She is beautiful, isn't she?"

She contracted her eyebrows, widened her eyes and gave him a warning look. She then tried to walk away which is when he caught her wrist and stopped her.

"Tell me Khushi. Don't you think she is perfect match for me?" He provoked her trying hard hiding his grin.

"She is full crack pot perfectly custom made for mustard sized brain of yours" Happy? Now leave me alone and go lick her a*s" She tried to walk away shrugging his hand.

He swiftly caught her elbow and pulled her slamming her frame against the wall. She closed her eyes nervously with the sudden jerk.

"Why are you so upset?" He whispered reading her expression.

"I am not upset. Why will I be?" She tried to mask her feelings.

"Oh really? Then why are you upset seeing me with another woman?"

"Am I upset? I think you are mistaken Mr. Raizada. Incase you didn't hear me properly, I am happy that you both are made for each other." She spoke sternly with moist eyes.

"You are jealous, aren't you?" He asked curving up his lips teasingly.

"Let me go" She tried to free herself.

"I can see it all over your face" He smirked.

"Like I said before, you can hook yourself with any girl you want. I don't give a damn." She looked away avoiding his gaze, making him angry.

He squeezed her arms in tight hold and whispered gritting his teeth, "If I really had to hook myself up with some random girl, I wouldn't have spent all these years roaming behind you. I wouldn't have started and ended my days with you, if I really had to lick someone's a**." He released his hold on her arms shrugging her off and tried to walk away angrily.

She understood his every word yet she didn't understand what he implied. She instantly clutched his collar and stopped him. "What do you mean? What did you just say?"

"That's for you to figure it out!" Saying this he freed his collar from her grip and walked away leaving her all perturbed and flustered.

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Part 8 by dj_arshifan

Khushi was in her room, all restless. There was function going downstairs, her favorite songs were being played but she cared the least. Her mind was completely occupied by Arnav & his words.


Lost in her thoughts, she walked out of her room & bumped into someone.

'Ouch' she cried, rubbing her forehead.

'Where was your mind K?' NK asked her friend who now opened her eyes to see the person whom she had bumped into.

'Sorry, was in a hurry.' she replied & was about to go when a thought struck her mind.

'Erm..NK. I need a love guru advice, you know na how poor I am at it?'

'I am all ears for it K'

And then khushi asked him indirectly about her situation, mentioning all the incidents in he name of her friend lavanya!

'I see, well its not complicated as it seems. It simply shows that the girl likes the guy as much as the guy likes the girl'

'Huh?'

'oh god khushi! Its so easy to get. I wonder why your friend is confused? The guy directly confessed his feelings. And for the girl..'

'What for the girl?' she cut him off.

He looked at her & then quoted 'Jealousy in love is competition'

'Jealousy?Love?Competition?'

'He that is not jealous, is not in love. Though here it is she'.

And as Nk left, khushi exclaimed 'Shit! I am in love with arnav'




Never thought of this so soon, did you?😆 But I wanted to use those 2 quotes so bad! All the best to the next writer😊

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NOTE (from Tabby)!

HEY GUYS A SLIGHT CHANGE IN RULES,
THE THING IS WHEN SOMEONE RES'S AND YOU ALL COMMENT LATER IT BECOMES JUMBLED UP. SO I REQUEST ALL THE WRITERS WHO WANT TO "RES" TO SCRAP ME FIRST AND ILL ADD YOUR NAME TO A LIST IM POSTING ON PAGE 1. SO THE READER AND WRITER KNOW WHO IS UP NEXT.

-THANKS

P.S. ANY QUERIES PLEASE SCRAP TABBY 😊


Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
aww LOVED IT DEE!!!
jealousy was very well used!!!
im waiting for someone to res since no one has res'd yet!!
i really wish someone new tries to continue this!!

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