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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: GAURI29
nice one dear...

hi gauri, thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
Indi this was lovely 😃

the he speaks to her everytime...its adorable

one before goin...tht cute fight nd my fav part the way blabbers to her abt her on their bed cuddling...so freaking adorable 😳

he joined ventures to open boutique all over...WoW!!!

very nice OS 👏👏

thanks so much, supriya, glad you like. as you can see that mad story writing bug has bitten me... 😆 these two are such an item together, you just want to make them more and more.

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bs_deeps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

you wrote something and I didnt know till now..waaa..off to read now..

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

^^^ sorry, dips, one sudden spur of moment story, didn't really pm much, sorry. light easy story, just playing with my favourite dolls, 😆. one of them has been not working for too long.

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Indi!

I am angry at you now! I need PM. Bas!! 😡

Ok ... I am calming down .. down .. down .. hmmm

Someone gives us so many ideas and thoughts, no?? And you have executed this one wonderfully. Just an important day of the life of a businessman .. and so important it is for his pagaal wife too. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Especially loved this part .. too good!

"the pool, the garden, the skies watched silently. only butterflies fluttered. hush, don't tell anyone anything, asr has banned all media for a while."

You are awesome! 🤗 You probably know that, by now! 😉

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Indi,

Lovely OS. Both parts amazingly written. Arnav knows his wife too well. 😳 Finally Aman gets a break. 😆

Only one thing, I too felt uneasy about the teeka on the photo. But it does depend on person to person. People tend to find a way, some loopholes in the rules and do things that otherwise seem to be of questionable nature. Also, saw your reply to a similar comment and agree with your pov.

And about the Hindi, atee uttam. 👍🏼 😊

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Indi!

I am angry at you now! I need PM. Bas!! 😡

Ok ... I am calming down .. down .. down .. hmmm

Someone gives us so many ideas and thoughts, no?? And you have executed this one wonderfully. Just an important day of the life of a businessman .. and so important it is for his pagaal wife too. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Especially loved this part .. too good!

"the pool, the garden, the skies watched silently. only butterflies fluttered. hush, don't tell anyone anything, asr has banned all media for a while."

You are awesome! 🤗 You probably know that, by now! 😉

farha, i 🤗 you. you are the essential writer, aren't you... understanding another's trepidations, hopes, desires, and encouraging where you know it is needed. that tender place inside all who create that is fragile... i look at your list of writings and i marvel... takes inspiration, imagination, and crazy amounts of guts.

thanks, sir... i will pm you, bas. just that thoughts about asr and someone keep going through the head and it's reached a pitch where expression is becoming really required. something else in my head... will pm after it's done.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Indi,

Lovely OS. Both parts amazingly written. Arnav knows his wife too well. 😳 Finally Aman gets a break. 😆

Only one thing, I too felt uneasy about the teeka on the photo. But it does depend on person to person. People tend to find a way, some loopholes in the rules and do things that otherwise seem to be of questionable nature. Also, saw your reply to a similar comment and agree with your pov.

And about the Hindi, atee uttam. 👍🏼 😊

hi durga,

aiyo, hindi atee uttamwa... dhinka chika... thanks so much for liking, my dear one.

thanks so much.

as i said about that tika to jenny (and i was completely unaware of this thing, gadha me), cultural norms differ across our country and maybe she's found her own way around that problem. she tends to be quite creative when she needs to be. maybe asr has overheard her talking to that picture before, complaining, getting upset, whatever and even putting a make believe tika on it. she has this deep relationship with salman ji's poster... she even has a shot of doli i think with it... she talks to mr khan all the time, maybe in the same vein, her private and personal shot of her man... gah i am dying to know what he's wearing in it, is it a close up or a ... 😆

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago