ArShi OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye

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Asrkkgsr

@Asrkkgsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

fantastic story.seperation is too much to bear.loved all character.i hope u will resumewriting after eid.

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

loved the way u expressed the feelings and pain of separated lover...it was amazing...
d way u have shown their feelings when they met after 3yrs was equally wonderful...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nahin when you come back do continue dear
wow that was so beuatiful
they were separate for that long
how did they deal with the years
the loneliness and missing each other like hell
but what else could they do right
parr itne saalon ke baad jab mile hain toh ab kabhi nahin bichdaye ge nahin waah
the distance made the heart grow fonder
but also so hard to be away from one another
man who would have thought that their love didnt decrease with the years apasrt
in fact their love only grew didnt it
and the reunion was just magical
to think they had been waiting for this day for long
seeing each other again made their heart live again
ahhh so beautiful
well must say congrats for your bros wedding and your cuz
hope we see you again soon once again
cheers for pm

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Aww this one is one .of the most beautiful os i have read.
each and every emotion of arshi is beautifully written .
their seperation their reunion awesome.
its really hard to live without ur love.
thank u for writing such a beautiful os.

happy ramadan and enjoy ur brothers wedding .we will be waiting for u.

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

this is really emotional story... love story...

you are an awesome writer... love it

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suwin

@suwin

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

beautiful OS...
hope to see you soon...
thank you...

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautifully written
superb shot
thanx 4 d pm
come back soon 😊

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Excellent story and beautifully written👏

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

this was WOW!! light, little sad in the beginning and naughty and breathtaking at the end!

arnav turned firangi on return but pure punjabi and indian at heart?!! me loved it! 😊
khushi, u're so lucky to have such a nice and caring and loving husband who breathes because and for you! there are woman whose husband have left for abroad never to return creating a mockery of the marriage. their separation was really heartening to see. im touched how you so simply wrote a beautiful story of a middle class punjabi family with little bit of everything needed to make a story enjoyable to read...
its sad we wont be having updates form you anytime soon...had always waited for you to update a new os.hope you enjoy the festivals coming up and pls come back soon! 😃