ArShi OS#17: Tumhain Haq Hai - Page 5

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Aww nycc os

Originally posted by: gifttag

Such sweet story.
Awesome loved it, Khushi had to take initiative.
This Arnav is such gentleman.
Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Asrkkgsr

nice os.loved arshis first date

thanku so much you all...
hope you enjoyed there first date😳😃

Originally posted by: anu17

awee such a cute and lovely os... soo sweet...

want to read it again...

Originally posted by: sanluvug

awesome...

Originally posted by: Jyoti_1991

Beautifully written
awesome os dear

thanku anu, san & jyoti...
so happy you liked this OS🤗

Originally posted by: VYGA89

Awesome!!!
Beautiful os.

Originally posted by: kritash

awesome OS.
really loved it .
superb.

Originally posted by: sikhni_

awesome

thanku you all...😳

Originally posted by: Alai123

Lovely!!!

Originally posted by: arshi-sugi-ipk

Beautiful os 😊 loved it 😊

Originally posted by: ajoop

loved it


"Apko maine ye haq dia hai sir...Mujhe chunay ka...mujhse pyaar..."

She stopped and bit her lower lip.

Arnav gave a side looped smile on seeing such a shy side of this usual naughty Khushi.

"Mujhe haq hai...?."

He lifted up her chin with his other hand while with one, kept her close.

She looked at him and nodded softly.

"Haq hai.. Sirf aapko haq hai...Aj appne chu liya...Abh koi or mujhe nahi chu paye ga"


loved these lines 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

thanku you all...
ajoop, glad you liked these lines yaar...
just coz of this last line...i wrote all dialogues in hindi😆😳

Originally posted by: chavvi16

True true you rarely write such innocent os

But you did cool

Even that had more than enough passion though

Well it would be right

After all arhi are the ones there

Awww he was totally checking her out

Even though he tried so hard not to

She wasn't really helping with his self control was she

But then she didn't want it either

So cute the way she made him put his hand on her waist

Tie phenanne ka kuch toh ho faiyada

Bless the way she said its his right that was just adorable

Now I gotta read the previous one too

Think missed out on that one perhaps

Cheers for pm

thanku so much chavvi...
am so happy that passion wasn't missing in here n you enjoyed this os too...
how could arnav stop himself to adore that beauty of God...
nah...normally, girls do fantasiced about being in the arms of the man, they love...
the first touch...
she waited for him to make a move but when he didn't bother, she took the chance😆😆
luv ya😳
ur comments always make me smile so plz, keep supporting😊

Originally posted by: sam19_2009

lovely OS
thankss for the pm dear
keep writing

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

sooo cute😊...awesome os..loved khushi❤️..thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: ameena671

wow great os loved it thank you for pm.

thanku sam, tanvi and ameena😳😳
loved to know that u liked this os😃

Originally posted by: Divya4Srk-Barun

This was so cute. loved the way you described everything. Khushi using his things and imaging that she may use after also :) perfect it was.

Originally posted by: hariyamalik

so damn good👏...beautiful😳

thanku so much divya and hariya...🤗

Originally posted by: avikasharma

superb fantastic amazing os!! yes, these many coz tumhara in sab pe haq hai! :P
loved it !!😊

poor arnav...his first date started with a heavy rainfall. but that didnt put any hindrance. right?! infact he got a very sensual view of khushi 😉
soo cute of khushi to gift him a tie...i know it wud have meant way too much to him than what an expensive gift wud have..!
i liked her boldness...she gave the right to touch her to arnav...isnt that a step forward in their relationship when arnav was so hesitant?!
thanx for such an awesome 2nd part! was waiting for it eagerly! 😊
tc.

awee...thanku so much avika dear...
yup, rainfall also got its benefits😆😆
surly, even if she would have gift him a tie pin instead of tie, it would had mean alot to him coz its the emotion behind that gift, which matters to him😃😳
yup, surly thats a step forward...she needed to give him an assurance over herself😊
thanku for the lovely comments dear🤗
hope you will like further OS's too

Originally posted by: casker

lovely OS.

Originally posted by: mastermagician

Amazing Oneshot!😊

Originally posted by: Sona257

Beautifully written !!! <3 it

thanku so much guys🤗

Originally posted by: devishree

wow cute

Originally posted by: surlinchhabra

Nice one
Arnav and Khushi were too cute

Originally posted by: deeswarna

that was so sweet and like that khushi gave him all the rights:)

thanku sooo much you all...
all your appreciation means so much to meee😃😳