ArShi OS#15: Jiss Pe Hum Mar Mitay..(Completed)

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful os dear...
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thnxxx 4 pm...

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hira

@hiraarif

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

that wasreally beautiful.. andreally i loved the ending

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

superb one...

loved it...

thnks for the Pm...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ana...very well written os..keep it up..😊

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Fantastic OS. Absolutely loved it!!! 👏

If this is No.15 OS, can I have the link to other No. 1- 14 OS's?

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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awesome OS...
It was Mind-Blowing...
Love your Writing Skills...

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome os mind blowing very emotional he had to lose her to understand her worth beautifully done thanks for the pm

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munchkinland

@munchkinland

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey a very nice os……………

Just luved it……………….

Can I have the list of all ur other works pleaseee…………..

Pretty please…………….

I'll be very grateful to u…………………….

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

it was beautiful and realistic too

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.Melody.

@.Melody.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awesomeee os...
Totally loved it...
It's been long since u gave us a new os.. And this os turned out to be a beautiful one like always..
I so love the way you add song to the one shot.. It makes os perfect..
Wow concept was too good..
Never imagined Arhi as a film jodi.
Hence i really enjoyed imagining them so. Khushi's long love finally reciprocated and Arnav's realization was shown so nicely..
And the fake kissing scene which then changed to real one was awesome hehe..
You always make me feel like not to stop scrolling down when reading and i hate it when the story ends as don't want to stop reading..
plz do update a new OS soon.. :)
A big thanks for the PM ...

Edited by Pari93.9 - 12 years ago

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