Arshi: Memories! Chapter # 4 & 5 Updated 11/10/13 - Page 2

Originally posted by: rockprincess123

Woow dear Minahil (I love your name btw, it is very beautiful Masha'Allah!!), a very gripping first chapter!

Khushi's journey has been horrible and everything she had to go through at the hands of her evil father was heartbreaking. One simply should not be exposed to such torture!

I love how despite of everything, Arnav is always there for her and supports her like no one else does. It is very sweet to see how much he cares for his Khushi and it very obvious that these two are very much so in love <3. Simply beautiful work on their relationship.

I am really interested to know how you go about continuing this and I cannot wait to read more of your story! Thanks for the PM honey.

Lots of love, Noor :) xxx

Originally posted by: aicha99

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read the prologue.. and the 2 chapters.. i like it! quite a different concept.. good work...

Originally posted by: rockprincess123

Minaa!!!!

Awwh that had to be the sweetest thing ever!

I could imagine the whole scene with Khushi, Arnav and Aarav all together as one happy family! I love you for that!

ArShi's convo was really beautifuland heartfelt and it was a beautiful way of reminiscing the awesome moments of IPKKND, especially their first meeting!

Its lovely seeing how much Arnav has changed for Khushi and I just love their couple chemistry together! It is by far the best ever!

Great update, lots of love, Noor :) xxx