STORY TELLING : their journey from contract to real marriage - PUUURFECT...to weave their multilayered story in few minutes - A BIG PAT ON UR BACK and well fast forward is ur forte - by choice *wink*
MOOD : restrained love..unrestrained eyes..uncontrollable love - PUUURFECT...
SCENE SELECTION : well u r called VMQ for a reason...KOI DOUBT MAT RAKHNA DIL MAIN...IT WAS SOOO PUUURFECT DAMMIT...
BUT...
SONG : well here u lost me..i like the song its a nice no but in my POV ITS MORE ON THE BUBBLY CHIRPY PEPPY SIDE not apt to ur choice of STORY TELLING..MOOD &most imp SCENE SELECTION..but then its my dumb opinion only. If instead of choosing their CONFUSED LOVE u would have chosen their AFFIRMED LOVE portion where khushi is always getting things done her way by CONTROLLING ASR TACTICS,portion of assured hugs & relaxed happy go lucky love bytes.. don't u think effect would have been much better?
and ufff she is never again going to msg me abt her vm again...she is already staring? me down with her hurt looks...she is so damn disappointed in me & my choice of harsh words...*trying to pout and give a sheepish look* HEY DEVI MAIYYA MADAD...
i was not late darling...maybe i was the first viewer of this vm just like all others,,but yeahhh i was not the first commenter bcoz well i can't lie to u and my side of truth was not so pretty this time and so I WAS AVOIDING..SORRY*sad smiley*
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I'm posting it here becoz i prefer not to comment on YT...
Dear ABF, Thank you so much for your honest opinion... You should totally point out flaws and what doesn't sit well with you, I prefer it SO MUCH more than praising me without really meaning it...
I know the song doesn't match perfectly. Well I have to confess, I LOVE this song, so wanted to make a VM. So of all Arshi scenes, its their confused love in the forced marriage track that captured my interest. Specially the words 'koi khushi aane ka bhi andeza hai"...
After i got my initial idea out, i just filled in the rest in a daze, so this may not be my best work...
Thank you again for your long comments... Love them...
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