SS: Bura Na Mano Holi Hai (SS in one part)

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Private holi! Really nice!

I specially like how you have written the part in Laxminagar.

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for more nice ones in the future. 😊

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow wonderful !!! loved the surprises of both for each other.. ARSHI -- the epitome of love...

thanks for pm 😊

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Sugi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Superb 😊 Thanks for the pm 😊

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Arnav_Khushifan

@Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thank you for the pm. I really enjoyed reading khushi and Arnav's Holi celebration. I liked how you remembered that they both do things for each other per eacother's taste. Loved the pool scene and everything that followed. Their love story is gong to live on forever even though the show is over and then with help of writers like you we can keep on living it.

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inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

That was awesome !! He thinks about her likes/choices while planning the surprise and she about him..How sweet ...

Thanks for the PM !!

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey Indu, just read the eng version & I loved the OS! :D It's extremely cute how Khushi planned her 4 step plan to trick Arnav and how she herself got tricked instead! Its adorable to see Arnav;s mischievous side.. While reading my reactions went from 😆to then ☺️ at the end.. Great job! :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

that was just fantastic
haiyye they both made sure the other got the holi surprise right
aww aint they just cute
aur sach mein that was one hell of a good holi with arhi
even better than the last

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chatterbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thank you for posting such a beautiful and sensual OS dear ! 😳

Enjoyed reading it thoroughly ! 😃

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

they sure love each other a lot :)

loved the way they both plan surprise fr the other, n tht too in a way they themselves wudn't like.. bt the other wud :)

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ForLoveofBarun

@ForLoveofBarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tanu3579
they sure love each other a lot :)
loved the way they both plan surprise fr the other, n tht too in a way they themselves wudn't like.. bt the other wud :)

Thank you dear Tanu. Isn't that what enduring love is all about being able to accept the other as a whole😊 Glad to hear your thoughts on this and Serendipity as well😉