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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I need more...it was nice ...but i felt it to be incomplete

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I'm here all going Awww, that was touching and lovely and beautiful.

Gimme another part!

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Could you please continue this. Dil nahin bhara.

Charu.

Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago

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sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

who is the teacher now? Arnav or khushi??!!

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avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Reminded me of Holi! Lol! Drunk Khushi. Sober Arnav...but for how long. I think you should definitely continue this.

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

You cant just stop there. We want more, we want more. You get the drift, I hope :)

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

there has to be more... isnt there???

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

He had someone else before but tonight,with khushi , he is all khush.. Nice one..
Aur chahiye!

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awww...that was lovely.

And you are a cheater! Itna kam jo likha hai!😆

I loved this V. :)

Short, sweet and beautiful.

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

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Okay so after three pages of "itna thhoda, continue please" I think I will. Though a fair warning in advance, I don't make any promises. I meant to keep it as an OS, and will turn it into an SS ONLY because you guys are awesome, and I essentially have nothing to do.

So, I shall treat the original shot as the excerpt, and write chapter one sometime =)

About the PMs - I won't do them. Please stalk the thread, I honestly don't have it in me to PM everybody. From my side, I shall update this story in every two days. I'll send PMs for this when I send out PMs for the other story. So the time I will take to filter my buddy list from people who don't wanna read the story, I will utilise to write the actual story. That's cool, nahi?

So bottom line - this has officially been turned into an SS. And the original shot is the excerpt. I'll change the title when I post chapter one. Also - I'll probably be renaming this story.

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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