[AK] FF:Heart of the Ocean | Prologue & Chp 1

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

d 1st chptr was quite intrstin..:)n m alrdy lovin it.:)

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nagina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice start

Continue soon

Thanks for pm me

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Oh God! *screams* titanic! TITANIC! ❤️
i guess,its the first time m reading something by you..i figured out that it s about an ocean,then i figured out ship,then jack and rose,then i thought of the end of the movie but then 'happy ending' caught my eye..and m EXCITED..! Thats so pleasing to read..
Coming onto the story..the narration simply awesome..not once the visuals of the movie hampers the imaginative visuals this chapter paints..+no surprises,arnav and khushi catches my heart..calm 1st meet. :)

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wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Incredible start.

Waiting till you update the next chapter.

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monsi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Haila.. titanicwa n arhi ... me all excited ... 😃

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gopikaaji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

😛what to say ...simple ...start is awesome ...
prologue...its poetic..beautifully written ...surly make us longing to read..
yes Arnav is ocean ...
"The Ocean can hold you in its womb, caressing you as a mother would. But it can also tear you apart, throw you into an abyss from where there is no escape. It all lies in the way one interprets it".

so true and I loved it...

narrates minute details ...to its perfection ...its something decorate ur FF...looking forward for updates ...

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hello, Risha... loved the premise... transporting arnav and khushi into the past and putting them on a luxury liner, with no hope of escape from each other is just marvellous... loved the verse and the name you've been inspired to use as the title... it is a play on arnav's name and completely apt as we will be dealing with matters of his heart! so the class distinctions are being maintained and arnav already has khushi's payal... the English ladies being mesmerised by arnav's husky voice and dark looks was a nice touch... simply bowled over by the beauty of your description: A voice you could associate with the sound of rustling leaves on an autumn evening, rugged. A voice which in appropriate conditions could be dripping of as much warmth as a hot coffee on a wintry morning. sheer brilliance! can't wait for the next part!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago