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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alright to be honest i really cant see ASR dying but u are an amazing writer so give it a try 😊
But one small request dnt shw him as dead and yeah i too go wit that coma idea...
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
I understand what you are talking about ...we realise the deapthness of love more only when we understand we will never get a chance to feel it agian... .that pain is so deep which will make our heart observe it even though it is painful... that pain has a pleasure which gives the essence of deep love...go a head n write it ...let me feel that love, the love with deepness and cry with my heart wench lilke never beore and let me enjoy it ...yes this pain will make you enjoy it becuse it show the values of love in deep ...deep ,deep from inside ...write dear ...but dont expect much people to read ti ...so many will not have the guts to face it ... but just try let us see how people react ...and please dear this is a negative story so be ready to face the readers who poen up with their feelings 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Well, personally I wouldn't prefer Arnav's death, although that will portray the pain that khuhsi is going through..
I agree with the idea of Arnav going into coma and waking up after a long period of time..
But, I'll support and definitely read what you write..
So, go for what your heart says.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashmir24

I understand what you are talking about ...we realise the deapthness of love more only when we understand we will never get a chance to feel it agian... .that pain is so deep which will make our heart observe it even though it is painful... that pain has a pleasure which gives the essence of deep love...go a head n write it ...let me feel that love, the love with deepness and cry with my heart wench lilke never beore and let me enjoy it ...yes this pain will make you enjoy it becuse it show the values of love in deep ...deep ,deep from inside ...write dear ...but dont expect much people to read ti ...so many will not have the guts to face it ... but just try let us see how people react ...and please dear this is a negative story so be ready to face the readers who poen up with their feelings 😊



I respect everyone's feeling here...and can understand how they will react. I tell you di, when I am thinking how I pen down my thoughts and feelings...that picture in my mind wrenched my heart more...I have exact picture, how things will go...I may not be able to write down the way I think, so, the emotions might not the way I am feeling😳...so, that's why, I am asking for suggestion about this idea and many suggested about coma scene...so, I am pondering over that too :-)

TBH, even I don't have guts to read my story again, once I have posted it here😳
Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EDITED😳 Please read first page again :-)
Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Happy new year Gazal...
Yeah even though i don't want an actual death scene to happen in the show...i would definitely read an OS over that...
U know na...i love all ur OS s...
So...please lemme know when u update...
Buh byee...all the best n...have a prosperous new year Gazal... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 7_sneha_7

Happy new year Gazal...
Yeah even though i don't want an actual death scene to happen in the show...i would definitely read an OS over that...
U know na...i love all ur OS s...
So...please lemme know when u update...
Buh byee...all the best n...have a prosperous new year Gazal... :-)



Happy New Year di!

And all the best to u too😃

Will PM you when I write it :-)
Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Ok ...now somany wants coma stage...😃.yes ofcourse Arhi is sealed in each ones heart that they never let them die even if the world ends😳...BUt like you said it will kill the essence of the story ...the plaeasure of the deep pain when kushi lose him is different from the pain she experiannce when she expect him to come back ...I was also with the people who mailed to sp aginst his death track ...But when I read your thoughts ,my heart was thirsting for that rare experiance of pleasure from pain...Iam still with killing him...even though my heart it self dont want to say that word...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am sure BS and SI acted fabulous in that scene....but this is the only ARSHI/SARUN scene i will never want to see...

because i feel it as an insult to arshi's love...the star cross lovers...

nothing against u buddy..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gazal..


Buddy, even I don't ASR to die...but this pic provoked me to think over this idea :



His expression! Like he is calling her for last time...as if...Ah! Every minute I see this pic, my hands become restless😆 to write.

dont remind me of his hand i once made a siggy on this photo and his hand was floating in mid air 🤣

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