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samba12

@samba12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Enjoyed the fruit analogies!

It was Khushi's explanation of why Arnavji is like a naariyal that made the piece so special.

And NK's naivet as well.

Thanks for this one as well,

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

well they were aptly named for sure
he is a coconut for sure right
and she a mixture of fruit jams
awww he is so cute right

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

You're so creative and talented seriously!

All your OSs have been so different yet amazing.

This one was so different yet so good!!

The way you showed Arshi covo & them forgetting everyone was around them was too cute and sweet.

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sofiaroth

@sofiaroth

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I am in awe of how u come up with such amazing ideas and put into your wonderful words.:))))

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

You did justice to all the characters with fruity traits!

Loved reading this light hearted OS!

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I was looking out for your Friday installment. This was adorable.

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

how beautifully written. I want to see that golden pen that you are writing all these.

I would take an excerpt from your OS here:

"Naariyal kaisa hota hain? Andar khusne keliye kitni mehnat karni padti hain? Pehle ek kadhin chamda, uske andar mushkil se khus gayi toh bahut saari chhilaka. Phir bhi himmat nahi haari toh ek atoot khol, jiske andar jaane mein kaamyaab rahein toh milega apne mehnath ka phal, ek naram dil aur dedh saari meethi ras."

i was even called by many as tender coconut, so first time in my life I heard someone else using the same term. Really fantastic. waiting for your next one.

Stroking her head part was excellent. How nice would have been that if they had shown something like that in the show.

Edited by dkatmala - 12 years ago

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

You are a wonderful writer !!! I just keep waiting for these OS . Thank you so much. for such wonderful updates.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hi was looking forward to your update on monday...😭

Hopefully you will give us double happiness on wednesday...😉

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Thanks for the link...

Yup read that one truly an outstanding tribute.

But you see i have become very greedy so was waiting for an update of Vignettes over and above this.

I am truly impressed with your writing skill...what makes me really happy is that we get to read all that we never got to see but wanted to see in IPK. The way you write i can literally see the entire episode being played out right in front of me.

Where do you get such great ideas from. Continue your great work.

regds

Liza

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