Arhi SS - Myriad Shades Of Khushi

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Index

Chapter 1 below

Chapter 2 72779316

Chapter 3 73113339

Chapter 4 73854272

Chapter 5 74378843

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OmNaMaSteOm

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rima

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Posted: 12 years ago

Me first Me first

Well written

I think this is the way Anjali should have been handled when she was acting like a 4 year old

Khushi was so mature and she was caught in the fiasco of Shyam

Yet she never got the sympathy

whle Anjali by fainting and hurt fragile expressions got away with sympathy from RM members

But no one cared for Khushi and what she went through and how she suffered

No one appreciated her maturity

I am glad you did it in this SS

Very glad

And I like the conversations

Only request

Blend the romantic scenes more causally and not so suddenly

Let the moments come out of more deep emotions

Just a small suggestion

Otherwise a perfect SS

Atta job Chutki👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

wah re Harshu.. kamaal kar di... great start yaara 😆

now eagerly waiting for the Anjali dhamaka 😳

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Gayathri

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Great start Harshu!

I should have expected Anjali to be like this In YOUR story 😆

And seeing Paayash romance was different! Good one. Glad to know that Akash has a spine and Payal has a voice!

And happy that Arnav for once gave more importance to Khushi than DI. Would like to see more of their romance!

Awesome start buddy! Lets see how it unfolds!

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Kookiemonster

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Posted: 12 years ago

I only have 1 kostin.

Bhat about Anjali?

Do you have something planned for her?😎

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

I finally felt something cool...and nice over my burning heart.

God. The way I wanted Arnav to once, at least ONCE put Khushi above his Di.

Thanks for making it possible at least here. The show had lost everything. The writers too had lost their marbles, only if they had taken a peak in IF's FF/SS section..

okay enough said.

I liked it. Really.

The best line?

"Di seems to be mixing up the concept of brother & husband."

😆

That's exactly how I felt when Anjali had gone all weird over her brother during that time.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Harshu that's some warnings there in the beginning Darn girl!! 😆

Lovely start my dear, just to let you know I already hate Anjali's behavior.
She is so delusional and sickening.
I love the way Arnav is dealing with her and I'm glad the rest of the family are not putting up with her rubbish and giving in to her demands.
Her selective blindness to Shyam is disgusting and I wish your Khushi could give her a piece of her mind as well. How dare she blame Khushi for Shyams philandering ways?
Loved it Harshu but please Anjali need to find reality that she left somewhere at a temple or maybe Shayam took it away!!