Seducing Mr.Perfect -Part 1(pg11) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz continue dear.and plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Before evrything i juz wanna clear sumthing...i'm not a good writer...😆...sorry...
sorry for dis late update...i was busy rabba veying vid my books...
please kindly ignore all mistakes...i juz typed it in a hurry...
okay...i'm not gonna bak bak any more...here is the first part...nd a short one...sorry..
Part 1

Khushi was packing her bag.her face was glowing vid a unexplained happiness.Payal was sitting at one side of the bed eating her potato chips..


Khushi : I'm really excited.rishi will be so surprised to see me in UK.


Payal : come on khushi.why would be he happy to see u in UK.infact he will be angry i guess.


Khushi : Payal i know that u don't like him...actually he is kind of sweet.


Payal : huh??Rishi & sweet??? Have you lost it Khushi? Remember how he was shouting at you on your birthday and that too for no reason.sweet people don't do that sweetheart and one more thing "I HATE HIM"


Khushi : Shut up Payal...just shut up...


Khushi threw a pillow targeting Payal,but she misses..

Just then they hear a door bell.


Payal: you pack.i will look who is at the door.

Payal ran to the door.


Payal: Coming!!!!


At the door there was a guy wearing a black T-shirt and blue jean.He was whistling some song and looking here and there.He was waiting for the door to be opened.Payal opened the door.


Payal : Karan hi...how r you???


Karan: oh...wait ...what is this Payal? Is this how u talk to some one who comes to ur home?? Won't u let me come inside???


Payal:oh sorry...come inside na...


Karan: thankz Payal.By the way where is my baby sister...?? busy huh??


Payal: yup...packing...


Karan:okay...


Karan walks to the room.


Khushi:arre bhaiyya ...you???


Both hugged each other..


Karan: So how r u my sis??


Khushi: i'm good bhaiyya.how r u?? Howz mom and dad??


Karan:everyone is good yaar...so u r going??


Khushi: yup...


Karan: khushi why don't you change...


Khushi: oh bhaiyya please...why no one like him???


Karan: khushi i'm saying this for ur good...rishi is not ur kind of guy..he doesn't even care about you.For him u r just his girlfriend.nothing more than dat...i will admit it..I Don't Like Him,even mom and dad don't like him.


Payal: This is exactly what i was saying...


Khushi made a sad face..


Karan: i din't say that to hurt u...the truth is that when it comes to the matter of love and relationships u r extremely sensitive..nd now u r giving too much attention to Rishi..


Khushi was sad.


Karan: oh khushi..now don't cry...ok ok..i was just saying what i felt...but if u r happy with him nothing matters...


Karan hugged khushi.


Khushi: now lets stop this emotional act.bhaiyya can u drop me at airport plzz??


Karan: ok...lets go...bye Payal.


Khushi : bye payal...see u aftr three days...


Payal: bye khushi...hav a safe journey..call me when u reach der..

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Karan dropped khushi in Airport...she was really excited that now she will get some quality time to spend vid Rishi...


Ok datz it for now...

Comment...

I 'll update nxt part wen i get time...

Edited by divus14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
updated 1st part of the story...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
nice start...thanka for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Dhruvi2608

nice start...thanka for d pm

thankzz dear...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
OMG!!!!!!Amazing update

Very interesting
update soon

eagerly waiting for ur next update

pls pm me if possible😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mithi-kunal

OMG!!!!!!Amazing update

Very interesting
update soon

eagerly waiting for ur next update

pls pm me if possible😛

thankz dear🤗...i 'll update next part as soon as possible...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ashwathi

Great start..continue soon

thank u...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
interesting !!! will be looking forward for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
i kinda like the story!!! go ahead and bring it on...

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