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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

That left me in tears...

I do hope he comes back...in the real reel drama...

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

That was beautiful and emotional, Risha! I could so visualize the entire things happening. Your words have the magic to string and feel every emotion.

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

*gulps*

*drinks water*

*blinks 20 times*

*A lone tear slips*

Yeah babe. He can never leave us and go. He'll be with us. Forever.

Just a true consolation. He can never leave. Never. Not his Khushi at least.

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simim

@simim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

What is this? Back to back crying wale OS's...you write so well ...sigh...😭

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Risha, you made me cry. Literally.

This was so touching yet so melancholic. I cried realizing that we will actually see this scenario in the show in the coming few days However, the ending you wrote won't be shown in the show as well :(

Please do write a second part for this. It's a request. Would love to read what they do and how they behave after he returned.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

yeah where was he for two years
did he not miss her if he was alive
man that was heart breaking seeing her like that

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Why is everybody hell bent on crushing my heart on this fourm.
I was crying in the beginning but the ending made those tears, tears of happiness!!

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saritha

@IllGetOverIpk

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Beautiful... *made me cry.. even if its two or five yrs... he has to come back... he has to

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spuARHI

@spuARHI

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

i just fell in love with your writing.. its so heartfelt, loving and filled that innocence ... it was a complete bliss reading this ... thank you for such a beautiful story... i would love it if you could PM me your future works! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

wow so nicely written.i had tears in my eyes.

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