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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyy Everyone 🤗

Another OS by meee! Surprised, huh? 😆 This one is dedicated to my Crazy ARHIHOLICS gang!! Tashu, Fujjy, Rima, Shreya, Nayu and Zana!! Love you all ❤️

Warning: This one's a bit sad 😳

Happy Reading! 😛

***

He was sitting alone on a bench at a local park, close to tears, physically surrounded by people and children but mentally he couldn't have been more alone. Pain, his only companion, clenched his heart painfully making his breaths turn to gasps for air.

It was his Khushi's Death Anniversary today and the waves of pain that only lapped at him on normal days were rearing high up, threatening to wash over his head and pull him under.

How could his Khushi have left him so easily? Didn't she know he wouldn't be able to live without her?

He looked towards the overcast sky and for a second, thought it would've been better if he never knew her at all, at least he would've been spared of this excruciating pain but he discarded that thought almost immediately. If he hadn't known her, how would he have all those memories that he treasured in his heart so preciously.

A tear managed to escape the confine of his eyes and trickle down his stubble cheek as his mind went back to their first meeting.

*Flashback*

He was busy doing his math homework when a sharp and insistent knocking on the front door broke into his concentration, making him groan out loud. He hated being disturbed. Snapping his notebook shut, he trudged towards the front door, not liking being disturbed in the least.

"Beta, make sure you ask who it is before opening the door!" His mother called out from the kitchen.

"Ok Ma!" He replied and on reaching the huge front oak doors, asked in a loud grumpy voice, "Who's there?"

"Me!" Came back the cheeky reply of what sounded like a young girl.

"What do you mean by 'Me'? Don't you have a name?" He snapped back, annoyed at her silliness.

"Oh Arnav bitwa, it must be the little girl from next door! There's new to this neighborhood." His mother came hurrying forward and unlocked the door.

A fair young girl of about 8 or 9 with huge beautiful doe-like eyes and her hair done in two tight braids which bounced on her shoulders with each step, let herself in, grinning from ear to ear carrying a box in her hands.

"Aunty, Amma sent you some Jalebies." She said in a cheerful voice, offering the box to Arnav's mother who took it with an affectionate smile.

"You make Jalebies at home?" She asked.

"Oh yes!" the little girl chirped. "My Babu Ji is a halwai so we make all sorts of sweets at our home. Even I know how to make Jalebies!" She beamed proudly.

Arnav looked at the young girl annoyed by her cheerfulness. What was so terribly exciting about visiting your neighbours with a box of home made Jalebies?

"Your name's Khushi, right?" His mother asked the little girl who bobbed her head in affirmation.

Seems like her name has quite an effect on her, Arnav thought to himself grumpily.

"So your name isn't Me?" He asked her a little sarcastically and to his surprise, she giggled, shaking her head in negative.

"Ok Aunty, I should be going now. I'll see you later." She said, waving at them both before turning on her heels and running away.

"Such a sweet child." His mother said to herself, smiling fondly.

***

Arnav was passing the Gupta house on his way back from school on foot when he heard shrieks and squeals of laugher coming from inside the house and a moment later, their front door banged out as two girls rushed out. He instantly recognized the little one, Khushi, who was drenched from head to toe and was now chasing her older sister with a bottle of water in her hand.

He saw the older sister coming his way and was about to move aside, when without warning, Khushi emptied the entire bottle on him, soaking him to the bone.

He glared at the young girl whose eyes turned to saucers while her mouth formed a perfect O on seeing what she had done. Without uttering a word, she turned and ran back inside her house making a soft smile adorn Arnav's face at her childish antics.

***

Two days later, he was just getting out of his house to leave for school when Khushi came running towards his house and with a meaningful look directed at him, dropped a piece of paper in his hardly ever used letterbox and ran away. He hadn't seen her since the water incident. Curiously, he retrieved the folded paper and read.

I'm very sorry for throwing water on you the other day. I didn't mean to. That water was actually meant for my Jiji. I'm sorry. Hope you aren't mad.
Me

He stared at how she had signed her little note with 'Me' instead of her name, and felt his lips curving up in a smile.

On getting home back from school, he quickly wrote an answer note before going over to drop it in her letterbox. It read:

Dear Me,
I'm not angry at you at all. And I'm Arnav by the way.

This was the start of their friendship. A friendship that flourished with every passing day. Over the upcoming years, hundreds of notes were exchanged as they slowly got over their awkwardness and became best pen pals telling each other every thing.

Even during the while Arnav went to study at Harvard, their contact remained. Their phone conversation would always start with Khushi chirping, "Hello Arnav, its Me!" making him laugh wholeheartedly.

None of them even realize when their friendship changed into love and before they knew it, they were blissfully married.

*End Of Flashback*

He put his hand inside his pocket pulling a crumbled piece of paper out. He read the text for what felt like the thousandth time. A last note from Khushi left on their refrigerator.

Going out with Preeto for shopping. Will be back soon.
Love you!
Me

She was lying. She didn't come back soon. She left him for good. Left him with an unbearable pain that slowly ate him from within.

He wondered for the billionth time how wonderful life would have been if she hadn't had that fatal accident on her way back home.

He didn't realize when it had started raining. The cold rain dripped through his hair and trickled across his cheeks like freshwater tears. It helped to clear his mind a little.

A big beach ball bounced his way and he caught it without thinking. He saw a little girl making her way towards him.

"Can I have my ball back please?" She asked him sweetly.

"Sure." He managed to croak out, handing the ball back to her.

"Why are you sitting here in the rain all alone?" She asked, tilting her head adorably.

"Because I don't have anyone to sit with me." He told her in a hoarse voice.

"Oh!" She seemed confused at his answer. "Do you want to play with me and my friends?" She asked him cheerfully.

"No, I should be getting home. My sister will be getting worried. You should go home too. Its almost dark."

"Do you know where I live?" She asked him, wide eyed.

"No!" He replied, smiling a little at her innocence.

"Good! Because you're a stranger." She told him nodding wisely making him laugh.

"Whats your name?" She inquired suddenly.

"Arnav. What's yours?" He asked, getting up.

"I can't tell you. You're a stranger, remember?" She replied.

Arnav laughed out loud without realizing. "What can I call you then?"

"Me!" She giggled, skipping away with the ball, her pigtails bouncing on her shoulder reminding him of another girl from all those years ago.

He felt a warm feeling fill his entire being and at that moment, he knew his Khushi had never left him completely.

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How was it?? Lemme know through your comments!! 😳

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tash10 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like the way they call him 'Kukkad Kamaal Da' 😳

RES

Will edit both by tonight! Is there a third one coming?😛
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You dedicated this OS to us? Aww, I love you
Your title reminded me of the one I just wrote some days ago, but you are evil!
You killed Khushi!!!
It was such a sad OS! As soon as I read your warning saying it was going to be sad, I tried to prepare myself but seeing Arnav sitting alone thinking of Khushi was a big blow!!
The flashbacks were so beautifully written!! I loved the fact that they have known each other for so long - right from childhood! And the 'Me' was so so adorable! I actually tried to imagine a choti Khushi and a chota Arnav. How they first met, the water episode, the exchange of letters, and how they gradually became friends and ultimately married was so magical. But the happiness did not last for long, right?
That sentence when Arnav says that Khushi did not come back was so heart-wrenching!!
"She was lying. She didn't come back soon. She left him for good. Left him with an unbearable pain that slowly ate him from within"

Felt like giving him one huge hug to console him!!
And the end with the little girl reminding him of Khushi was so sweet!!
Loved it!!
I read the sad OS first because I know the other one is a happy one!! Off to read it now!!!
Edited by tash10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was doing a bit of stalking n look what I found! 😛

**edit


*sniff* *sniff*


You killed Khushi!!! *sniff *sniff* I knew this was coming just by reading the first line


Fari, I am seriously very very sad!! I don't like sad stories one bit! *sniff* n on top of this you are ending ASR junior!!! *sniff* but there is one thing that will cheer me up, you writing another OS, a happy one!! you will na?



you dedicated this to us!!! Love you bears!!! ❤️ ❤️







Edited by Riima_Azraa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tash10

I like the way they call him 'Kukkad Kamaal Da' 😳

RES

Will edit both by tonight! Is there a third one coming?😛



Hahahaha 😆 Nope, there are only 2! Will post the last chapter of ASR Jr tonight or tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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am i hallucinating or something???😕😆

**********************************************************************************
my eyes welled up the very moment i read the first few lines..

if anyone could hear a heart breaking, im pretty sure that my mom just heard mine breaking..

seriously fari its way emotional..
even the last bit didn't help me the slightest to wipe off the angst i felt..
i feel tears chocking up my throat..

amazing shot it was..
proved your versatality as a writer forcing my mood to take 180 degree turn...😭
Edited by claireDD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: claireDD

am i hallucinating or something???😕😆



Hehehe😆 Replied back to your comment on my other OS 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmileyStar



Hehehe😆 Replied back to your comment on my other OS 😛



i edited my comment on this one too..
im off to grab a tissue😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliantly Written Fari!
Just loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was sad yet it left a smile on my face. The end was too good. Loved reading the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read u putting up arsJr.tonight???
Awesome.
N this.one was sooo cute <3 thnx for the PM

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