OS: Defeated Mistakes - Chapter Six

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jen_x

@jen_x

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Lol, i posted it on the other one... When i meant to post it on this one. but here it goes again:... Im glad there getting along :D Finally arnav sees Khushi and not think about going to La all the time :)

thanks u. can i please PM me too :)

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

this is pure evil!

What a place to stop😡😆

well written dear!

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tanjinajerin

@tanjinajerin

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

very nice waiting for part 7

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ssm122

@ssm122

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Fantastic..i love thr way u write!
Have just sent u a biddy request. Pls pm when u updatr.

Lets c how arnav deals with khushi now...wohooo

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

heyy gal... lybah.. still didn read this ff... bt already bookmarked itt !) vl surely read whn i gt tym... 😊

bt plz PM me... whn yu update ny of yur workz.!

Love ya,

Megha. 🤗

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Nice but I see a fight coming up.

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Jaan_Arshi

@Jaan_Arshi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow...rabba ve in telephone booth...😊

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aishwarya_rox

@aishwarya_rox

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesome awesome awesome!!!!! This was a fantastic update...Oh My God! Such a cliffhanger!!!! I want to know whether they kissed or not!! Really well written :D ...looking forward to more romance now *blush*