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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

in my ending Arnav is going to stay alive, so thanks for the open ending

Nice story

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

please continue this and give a happy ending...

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This is sooo sad,Yaar😭
cant believe that Arnav has met with an accident!!
Oh! He should b alright,isnt he??

That was beautifully written!
Its superb writting,Rachel😃

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Aiyesha

@Cutiee_Ashh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow,,very nicely written :) pleasee continue this if u can :)

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Khushi freaks out but gathers herself and rushes to the hospital only to be assured by the doctor that he has some minor injuries but shall heal quickly. Khushi breathes a sigh of relief and cries and scolds Arnav before kissing him! Then the next day, on their anniversary, they indulge in certain activities that shall not be named and nine months later Khushi's rasgulla, Arush, makes an entry!

There! That's what happens afterwards. Right? Right.

Yea I know, I'm psychic!

But on a serious note, beautifully written!

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

It was fabulous, but it was way too sad!

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

it's sad... it's heartbreaking... it's depressing... but that's life... you named it correctly... fate games... you don't know what the coming time will bring for you... after reading this am remembering the song, "what hurt the most"

you want to make us cry... hy na????

and yes i don't want another part... just keep it like that... i mean why we always want a happy ending... life has bad moments too... so no need to indulge yourself in some fantasy world and forget the harsh realities of life... it's better we face the truths of life as well...

brilliantly executed plot...

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels
Khushi freaks out but gathers herself and rushes to the hospital only to be assured by the doctor that he has some minor injuries but shall heal quickly. Khushi breathes a sigh of relief and cries and scolds Arnav before kissing him! Then the next day, on their anniversary, they indulge in certain activities that shall not be named and nine months later Khushi's rasgulla, Arush, makes an entry!

There! That's what happens afterwards. Right? Right.
Yea I know, I'm psychic!
But on a serious note, beautifully written!

ha ha! that was classic!😆