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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

damn! lost in eachother...

please continue!!!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG .. arnav had an accident... plz do continue and give us a happy ending😭

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was really heart wrenching! I like how you gave an open ending! In some way i feel it meant to have an open ending!

Arnav met with an accident and he dint hear her voice either.And this was a real life incident? :( That is what makes me sad more than Arnav-khushi Story!

Beautifully written Rach!

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nafisa

@NAFISA09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

plz cont n give us a happy ending plz plz...

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

that was really heartbreaking but beautifully written

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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

F**k. rach...😭

such a sad update...

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Thank God u dint write something abt death..or I wud have cried buckets lox...

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Rachel this is not fair seriously!!!!!

you shot arnav in your ff and now this!!

unbelievable!! why girl!! why this kolaveri??!!

any how that was very emotional!!

aww now you are filling this forum with sadness!!

love your writing woman!!

i don't know what you have in your hands

but they know "jadu"

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Arnav's accident scene was really sad. And I felt so sorry for him. Poor guy, he was trying to make up to Khushi. Well, since you won't be continuing the OS I have already written the ending in my mind. There is no way that my mind will let Arnav die. Both will live...to watch their Sangeet video bees, tees, chalis saal baad :)