OS|Arnav&Khushi||Dying to Breathe - Page 5

wow dear that was powerfully charged emotions of our arhi
man it was hard to swallow the lump in the throat while reading this but some how managed it
why does it happen to them only
cheers for pm

i lovedd it ...it made me cryy :(

it was amazing so heartfelt

That ws incredible...i cudnt hold back my tears...
Loved this piece..

well written but too sad. didnt want it to happen this way.

Originally posted by: --Siva--

Shiz!

I really apologize. I cant make myself read it completely. I tried taking break and read it again. But every time I started crying even before I started it.

Now I feel one thing strange - These many days when some OS's come in way, I've said heart wrenching - If that is true then what would I call this one?

Dont be angry on me Shiz.. I really tried but this is way too emoting. Nice work but. Making one laugh even to a bit or making one cry without any control means a great stuff to me dear! :)

Thanks for the pm

Siva 🤗 - you know i was reading all these comments about the OS being too much to take on, and how it made some cry. But it was really after reading your comment, i understood the gravity of what i had depicted in my narrative. So i am thankful to you, for making me see my own work through the lens of a reader. And really understanding, the depth of it. Thank you :)

And this coming from you, means all the much more.Also i am not angry, i am in awe of you and my readers. Everyone has always been honest and really supportive, when it comes to my writings.

Also, Thank you everyone for your wonderful and thought provoking comments. They always make me see my work through the eyes of a reader. 😳

shiz :]

that was so beautifully written.

Originally posted by: FarighInsan

This made me cry and realize and determine what my last wish would be... Not exactly what Khushi aske for, but the idea came entirely from your OS and i feel a little bit at peace now, just a little bit.. I love this Os.. Im bookmarking it and ill read it again, and again.. Till i memorise it. So that i never forget to do what this inspired me to do.. :"*

Your last wish - ? I can only pray and hope that is a long time from now. However i have inspired you and that is far more than enough for someone like me. Truly brought a rueful smile, because there are so many contradictory feelings within rise, with your comment. I feel happy, but i also feel sad, to have provoked such a deep feeling just through words which were spilled onto paper in a fit of pure, unadulterated rage.

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: dorindakate

Thanks for the pm...

How moving...feeling the anguish of their lost life together...all the bright promise that turned to ashes...her physical life that was draining away...

How gripping that knowing all the truth didn't save their life together...didn't stop the devastation of their hearts...of their inner lives...

How sad that life's greatest gifts can vanish and life can turn with a word---spoken or with-held..how tenuous our most treasured associations really are...

Thank you.

You know when i read this comment last night, i was at a peace for some reason. You weaved my narrative into a few lines, and clearly depicted my inner turmoil during the writing process of this peace. So, thank you for sharing your wonderful words with me. Always a pleasure.

Originally posted by: iwilldare

I am seriously crying right now. Will be back with my proper comments, soon.

Edited.

You have written this little tale so beautifully beyond words. I felt so sad for khushi, who had her life ripped apart by just one misunderstanding. And i was glad she did not go back to Arnav, despite him learning of her innocence. Their lives apart -- at the cost one shattering moment. And than when she asked him to set her free, i think my heart broke a little. No sorry a lot! This heart - wrenching to read - but i am glad she got her breaths back. She was in suffering, in agony -- a life filled with misery.

Just beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Now i am going to cry some more. Why did you have to write such a sad and moving story !

I am glad i could make you cry, for the all tears you have caused me over the years (but i still love despite all of that) 😳 Your comments complete my thread, i have clearly said these words over and over to you. Thank you for always taking time out to read and comment. Your words always mean a lot, although you mean a lot more :]