Arshi TS: Better Not Remember.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hmm very different and interesting and i like how you said it right at the end that Sir is Arnav

my assumptions where me thinking that Nurse Gupta is Khushi and her millionaire husband is Arnav but i was wrong haha

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

this is really really really interesting!do continue soon!😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

loved the mystery surrounding the old couple... but the moment you wrote he had a stubble and was pottering around his garden, had an inkling it was asr and khushi... so did he hurt khushi so much that it gradually devolved into alzheimer's? is ms. gupta somehow related to them? and who is ms. gupta's cranky hubby? kudos to you for making your protagonist want to be self-reliant and not dependent on her hubby... can't wait for part two... must commend you on the language and expressions used: just bang on!

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow...very interesting

Arnav loves his wife

please continue soon

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dimple288

@dimple288

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

wow.. just fabulous writing..👏👏 loved it.
all through the story, i thought it was khushi's point of view... the ending was awesome... only arnav singh raizada can be a such a caring and loving husband.
waiting for another lovely update

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

it'so strange n different...seems interesting...pls continue n thanx 4 d pm !!!😃

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un.complicated

@un.complicated

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

First of all, it was very sweet of you to dedicate the story to me <3 ... extremely sweet of you!

Secondly, WOW. What can I say? You have me hooked!

I am just stunned by the chapter. For a moment you almost had me convinced that Khushi was Miss. Gupta right up until the end when you revealed Arnav's character.

I am really intrigued to read more, to find out exactly why Arnav does not want his wife (who I presume is Khushi) to remember her past ... furthermore, where is the rest of the family?...

I'm sure that you upcoming chapter will deliver to the same standards, until then ... x

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Ohh. This is different but a good and interesting different. :)

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Very thought provoking...

Love nurse Gupta...her husband sounds very self-centered...

Love Arnav Sir...so kind and caring of his wife...

Wonder what all happened in the past that his prefers for her to remember him as someone else--anyone else rather than her husband...

Guess I'll just have to wait to find out in the next part...

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Don't know about u, but i just loved it. If this ts would have been a person, i would've crushed him with a hug! (hehe, pathetic analogy) Coz it's so sweet...
I've come across countless of OSs and FFs based on Arshi's childhood or teenage, college days and infinitely more stories on their adult lives. But this writing on their old age, is indeed one of a kind!
U got me confused at the starting 'Nurse Gupta' part. It was only when i read about 'Sir' insulting on the phone when i realised that the nurse isn't Khushi (on the lighter side, is Aman still working for Arnav with a walking cane in his hand?! :D)
Are nurse gupta and khushi related by any chance?
Arnav's pure love for his wife *Mystery?* made me sigh... Above that, the third person account and description made it even more overwhelming
I'm very curious to know what happens next, so better update soon. And I hope it has a happy ending...