Arshi TS: Better Not Remember.

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

aww...that was so nice...

Who is that nurse?
Oh ya! I knew he is ASR! poor Khushi 😉

nice part dear..

loved it dammit!

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

when I start to read you confused me that Ms Guptha as Khushi thats what you want ofcourse you suceeded in that. Thaht cawring hupsband is noqne other than Great ASR. What happend to Khushi? why ASR didn't want to remember old things... what you have done to her ASR... Can Ms Guptha brings his Khushi back... hope shecan. It will kill him loneliness especilly in tne oldage. Thanks for PM

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

This is truly an oscar winning script. Must say. Arnav in a new avataar. Such a huge leap from the angry young man to a loving huband to his oldie wife who considers him everyone on the earth except her husband...Truly amazing. Continue soon and reveal things like y is Khushi is in this state and wat about their family...

Thnx 4 D PM

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I promise to read this once you post part two :P

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

oh wow really nice dear...love the love for arnav for his wife...awsuuum n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I will also say it is a strange story. The old couple are Arnav and Khushi but in a strange way the nurse and her husband sound as though they are also Arnav and Khushi. I have no why I feel like they are.

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onetwothree

@onetwothree

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Amazing start...👍🏼...continuee...😊

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I am so very impressed, I cannot tell you! Its really wonderful to find a new author who's imagination is as good as her writing skills-most of the stuff that is posted on this forum either has a good plot that is badly written, or boring things that are technically okay, but that you forget immediately after reading.I currently have your SS "Mistake" bookmarked, and now I see I'll have to follow this one as well. I KNOW how exhausting getting emotional things put down on paper can be, so I wont hurry you as you write chapter 4 of Mistake, but I hope you'll update this one soon, as it seems like the story line is established in your head!

Edited by napstermonster - 13 years ago