ArShi OS#11:Pyar Ko Ho Janay Do...

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kalikijen

@kalikijen

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Lovely os... sweet and emotional arnav... nice and different

thanx for the pm

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautiful story...

Loved the slow transition from the little awkward around each other couple, to the in love ones...

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was beautiful...loved it!!

I loved how there relationship progressed!! From their emotional bonding to a physical relation...that was a beautiful journey...

I loved how you portrayed their each and every emotion perfectly...they went as a awkward couple but returned as soul mates...

Nicely written...

Thanks for the pm...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

aweee... that was beautiful... :D

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Ohh this was a very beautiful OS...loved it!!!

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kritash

@kritash

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome OS.
as always , you write one of the best OS's and FF's.
fantastic and fabulous.
loved it.
loved it , the way you nurtured theri trust and love for each other.
superb.

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.Melody.

@.Melody.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hai! ana! It was super cute! 'm out of words to tell u hw beautiful it was. . .n on d top of it, it was ua writing style which amaze me! U r g8 writer dea. . . I love ur os's. . .i feel its very refreshing to read! I always lov to read ua long cute os's. . . Plz do update anothr os! ! Ur last os was awesome n dis os s very cute1. I like d way u create each scenes which vil b filld wit romance, humour! It makes d story beautiful . . . . ! Tnx a lot for d pm. . . !!