Help in writing a speech for a student rep..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys!
At college, whoever wants to become a student rep.. write a speech.. so i dont know what to write.. I started like that.. and tell me whats wrong or right(like grammer) and correct it for mee plzz by rewriting it.. and give me more ideas what to write.. in paragraph plzzz. So here i started :
I would like to represent all of you and contribute my strongest dedication to our college. If i am selected as your representive, I will voice your ideas and insight to the college as well as make my own contributions to the college. I believe I qualify for this responsibility for a few resons, First of all, I am an extremely dedicated person, and am willling to cut out whatever time it takes whenver it is, to bring about positive change in the college. I am also organized and responsible. Getting in contact with headteacher,staff and students about issues. I can say in complete veracity that I will convey your opinions and my own to the college as well as inform you of anything you should know.
Is that speech right? If not, please do tell me(grammer,coomas and all) and anything that i need to include, and help me in ending paragraphs pleaseee? Btw, I am in 12th class.. so you have to tell me.. plzz(sake of barun and sanaya lol)
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Princy360 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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KOi to BOLOO plzzz it would be grateful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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According to me its fine, but who am I to tell you? I'm younger than you, I'm in 11th😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BornThisWay

According to me its fine, but who am I to tell you? I'm younger than you, I'm in 11th😆

LOOOL..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Koi aur hai jo mere madat kar sakta haiii?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it looks fine!! its not best i think you could be more creative in voicing your thoughts!
i m sure u will
delete the word strongest dedication its improper usage
use just dedication!!
and try revising things until u get satisfied!!
such speech should not be over done!!
balance your capabilities and your assurance!
Edited by snehashetty34 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I Can Help You, But I'm in 11th. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry to hurt you but honestly this perch will not help you move ahead. It's just hat everyone says you will represent and forward ideas this is what everyone does you have to come up with some innovation. Saying this based on my experience.

Sorry again but was only trying to be of help. Sit for a while gather your thoughts see what happens normally and what is missing what would you like to have or change if you could then write your speech because then your feelings will represent so many others and that is what will make the difference.

I hope it helped. And do let me know when u win...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sripriya_5

I Can Help You, But I'm in 11th. :P

Hi there, I'm in 11th too!😆
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Originally posted by: BornThisWay

Hi there, I'm in 11th too!😆



Heyy... Which Stream? 😃

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