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Savi_S

@Savi_S

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

awesome dear!. very nice of arnav taking khushis side n khushi asking her to take care of di. loved it!!! n thanks for pm.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Nicely written.. Loved it.. Arnav & Khushi being there for each other.. ❤️

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Beautiful ,well written I enjoyed reading it .

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Shilpa. How am I supposed to fault this? You are truly one of the great writers here and as for VM maker, what can I say. I am jealous😊. I so felt Arnav's contempt towards Syam, his disappointment for Anjali but his immense love for Khushi. Keep going. So glad you are continuing to write.

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

I would really love to see this in exactly the way u have described. Loved the way u have made ASR stand by his Khushi.

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

it was so so so well written that i am speechless 👏

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Nice,Beautiful romantic OS.Like it very much.The way he convince her like it.First the wrong reason then the right reason.Thus he shows her how much he loves her and trust her.Really beautiful.
I wish he said Anjali about the terrace scene and snake's confession...
Anjali didn't deserve an answer still I wished.I read somewhere else that never give explanation about your deeds to others because people who will trust you will continuously trust you without explanation but people who don't they won't trust you if you explanation.So no need explanation.

Brilliant Os

Edited by afnariaz - 13 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

CHALO AT LEAST HE WOULDNT LEAVE KHUSHI JUST BECAUSE OF SOMETHING HER ADOPTED MOTHER MAY HAVE DONE YEARS AGO
LIKE HE SAID HOW CAN HE LET GO OF THE ONE PERSON WHO MADE HIM BELIEVE IN LOVE WHO GAVE UP EVERYTHING TO KEEP HIS SISTER AND HER HAPPY IN THEIR MARRIED LIFE