Os : Our Crazy Ardor part 1&2 (completed)

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hi guys😊
This is the first time I am writing something so looking forward to your comments and criticism.Hope you'll like it enjoy reading.
please forgive any mistakes because i have not proof read 😉. guys please if you make an effort to read the whole thing a simple like or comment wouldn't hurt so plz be generous since im a newbie..thanx and happy reading :-D


part 1

" That I love you damn it" were the only words that were echoing in her mind while she stood by her window lost in thoughts of her arnavji ...
Just then her phone rang and she flashed her 1000 watt smile when she saw the name...

"Khushi tum white dress aur Khule Baal mei bohot achi lagti ho"
"Ek minute aapko kaise pata ki hum..." and she felt his arm on her waist
" mai tumhare bare me har khabar rakhta hoon" Khushi blushed and turned to face him "aap yahan kya kar rahe hain?"
" I need to talk to you Khushi and it's very important" He made her sit on the bed and took her hands in his..."Im sorry Khushi,mujhe shayad yaad bhi nahi hai ki maine tumhe kitni baar hurt kiya...for every single time Im sorry"
Khushi cupped his face in her hands " aapko yeh sab kehne ki koi zarurat nai hai. Hum jaante hain ki app humse bohot pyar karte hain...damn it!
They flung their arms around each other and hugged each other.

Arnav broke the hug "don't you think your forgetting something khushi?

Khushi: no! What will i forget?

Arnav: aren't you supposed to tell me that you love me too?

K: I already told you that

A: yeah you did but just once whereas i told twice

k: twice?

A: yeah on the phone don't you remember? I was dying to listen to your answer but you just kept quiet. I understood your silence meant a yes, but now i wanto hear it from you again. Please khushi?
K: what that means you said that for real?
A: what the! What do u mean? Of course i meant every word i said. What did you think?

K: i thot you just said it so that i should understand that you were in danger.

A: are you out of your mind khushi? Khushi just stared at him with a blank expression on her face.
A: just keep quiet and listen to me with out a word ok? she nodded

A: from the day you landed in my arms in sheesh mahal there was something in you that attracted me khushi...there was a strange magnetism in the air when you were near me. You evoked some strange feelings in me whenever you came near me. I had suffered alot in life and had built strong walls around me khushi because i feared letting anyone come close to me. I promised myself that i would never fall in love...he paused and looked into her eyes which were by now glazed with tears...But you khushi made me feel strange, I wanted to punish you for it, I wanted to hurt you so that you would hate me and would never come near me.
But you my brave lioness would never give up, you always made me feel like a restless lion. You made me react in ways i never knew i could. Do you remember in nainital when that man pushed you I couldn't tolerate it khushi I felt like killing him for touching you.
K: i witnessed that.If i had not stopped you...you would have really killed him!
A: just shut up and listen!she pouted and agreed.
A: khushi I hated it that i had no control over myself when it came to you. The same thing happened on Diwali night, I couldn't resist you and I realised that you evoked feelings in me which i never knew existed. I told you i write my own destiny so in defiance i announced my wedding with lavanya. One more thing khushi I never loved lavanya. NEVER.EVER !
Tears were brimming down khushi's face now. He wiped her tears and hugged her close and continued

A: it killed me from inside when i learnt that you were engaged. I could not tolerate the thought that you would be some one else's and i ended up hurting you again because khushi I was hurting and burning from inside. I felt suffocated. Somewhere i knew that you were not happy and then i swore that if that guy hurts you i won't leave him.
A: phir hum dono ne mil kar payal ko manaya akash se shaadi karne ke liye. Khushi your silly childish ideas and behaviour really amused me and when you smiled i felt peaceful and content.I liked being around you khushi...I always used to think of you and even lavanya understood and so she left.At this he felt khushi go a little stiff but he held her tighter.
A: its ok...and then that stupid NK arrived honestly khushi i felt like knocking him on his head when he came near you with all his nonsensical talks.
Khushi giggled and snuggled closer, so he was jealous!
A: I feel weird to admit it but i was actually jealous and when you laughed and joked with him i really felt like kicking him. How could you fall for a dumb fool like Nk when i was still there.
Finally when i realised i loved you i wanted to confess my feelings but when i went on the terrace the sight that greeted me killed me. I felt betrayed. I wanted to destroy everything, this whole world.
Khushi tightened her grip on him. And he felt pangs of guilt hit him. He was so wrong!

a:I went to tell di the truth and learnt that she was pregnant. I spoke to shyam and he told me that you were his partner in crime. I couldn't believe it khushi i was blinded by rage. Then i thought alot and came to the conclusion that the only way to protect di was to marry you.

K: so Arnavji you were not entirely wrong but if only you would have told me!

A: shhh! Let me finish...khushi you know very well that ASR is selfish and makes it a point to get what he wants. Khushi was confused. Khushi you idiot i wanted YOU. Her eyes widened and she just kept staring at him.
A: i wanted you khushi...i always wanted you to be by my side and since i thought you were involved with that creep obviously you wouldn't accept my proposal and ASR does not like rejection and so i forced you to marry me! This way i could keep an eye on shyam and as an added bonus have you with me. I loved you but i felt betrayed i never thought from my heart always from my mind and thats why i hated you but whatever i did i could never ever get myself to hate you. At the airport when you were pleading with me not to go i walked off but trust me khushi i believed you, I was coming back to you to tell you that i trust you but when i turned i was taken away by those goons. Khushi was practically digging her nails on his back now but he still din't say anything about that and continued...khushi I told you that i love you because I wanted to tell you the truth and because i wanted it to be my last words that i ever said when i left this world. She immediately put her hands on his lips and said no never!
A: you know khushi whenever you would come near me my heart beats faster and louder and so loud that i can actually hear it. At this khushi looked up and said " kya??? Iska matlab aapko bhi acidity hua tha?

"A: what the! Acidity? unbelievable! I am saying i love you KKGSR and your talking about some stupid acidity!

K: laad governor! bolna kya seekh gaye, hame hi chup kara dete hain!
A: bolo khushi...I'm all ears!

K: arnavji I think we need to go and thank that creepwa from the bottom of our hearts!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 (last part)

A:WHAT?? KHUSHI ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?? WHAT THE HELL?

K: just shut up and listen first you laad governor! Thanks to him atleast you married me!

I love you bolne me itna waqt lagaya toh shaadi karte hamare Budhe hone ke baad?

Thanks to him atleast i realised that i loved you and it wasn't acidity but my heart that was beating so loudly for you. I was never ever happy with him i was forced into that damned engagement!

A: khushi are you mad?

K: aap mad! Shaadi ke itne mahine baad I love you bol rahe hain! Pehle nai bol sakte the?

Aur hum yahan na jaane kya kya soche ja rahe the, pehle acidity, phir laga aap hum pe jaadu tona kar rahe hain, phir laga ki hume aapki bimari ho gayi hai.

Aap jaante bhi hain ki hame har jagah sirf aap dikhayi de rahe the, auto wala, watchman yahan tak ki dhobi aur hp/op mein bhi!

A: what the!

K: chup ek dum chup! Just listen...hum aapko aur lavanyaji ko ek saath laana chahte the aur jab humne lavanyaji ko aapki bahon me dekha toh hume zara sa bhi acha nai laga pata nai kyun...par hum unke liye khush the...hume aapko chedne aur satane me bada maza aata tha kyunki hume lagta tha ki kaam karte karte aur sab kuch sambhalte sambhalte aap zindagi jeena bhool gaye the...

A: arnav put his finger on her lip and said...khushi one minute...whenever I saw your playful and mischevious behaviour i actually felt alive khushi i loved to challenge you in a playful way it made me relive my childhood days. Khushi you have always amazed me with your antics and i just can' help admiring how you truly live your life to the fullest. Never change khushi I love you just the way you are.

Khushi just wanted to hug him tight but continued talking.

I always felt comfortable when you were around, i dono why i felt that but i felt the same magnetic attraction towards you. You were always there to help your damsel in distress. But i never dared to hope because of your strong words and the way you always reminded me about my aukat. On Diwali night i felt all butterflies in the pit of my stomach and again you made them fly away replaced by pangs of pain. I cried the whole damn night, it hurt and it hurt real bad.

Arnav clenched his fist in anger but this time he was angry on himself!

K: you stupid laad governor you din't have to be jealous of Nk because my heart was already yours!

Then we shared some cute and special moments i started hoping again but only to crushed again...you told me to marry me I couldn't believe it i was so happy and then you gave me a blow on my head when you continued your sentence. One more thing...Some part of me was happy to be your wife but again you said its only for 6 months. But I decided that even if you hated me il do my duties of being a wife. Couldn't you have just told me that it would be for a lifetime!

I never confessed because i din't want to give you the pleasure of knowing that you effect me.

I tried to live happily on my own i found satisfaction in irritating you I even wrote in my diary "101 ways to irritate laad governor"

Arnav chuckled.

I tried everything to hate you arnavji but i could never. I was always helpless when it came to you but I always cherished the little rabba ve moments we always had.

And when i got to know what you thought about me and that creep I couldn't take it. I had to clear my name I had to let you know that i hated him because you were the only person I loved.

When you left I felt empty and restless I never slept in peace after that seeing my condition Di and Nani booked my Tickets to London but on the way i got a Call from aman and he said that you had not reached. I almost died and then you told me that you loved me and i instantly knew that you were in danger. I found out where you were and when I saw you I can't tell you how happy i was.

Then again when you saved me and surrendered yourself to those goons I couldn't tolerate it I just wanted you back and safe by my side. I died almost every minute and finally you came back safe.

And then you know the rest i don't want to talk about those painful moments. But now I am happy and more than happy that your with me...I love arnavji from the very beginning.

A: khushi I promise you I wil always love you and will worship and cherish you from now onwards.

Il be ASR for the rest of the world but only arnav for you.

K: who arnav? I think I fell in love with laad governor and I love only him. I don't want you to change because i know that when laad governor loves somebody there's no one in this world who can love like that. Arnavji we messed it up the first time with our ego's and misunderstandings but not anymore, from now on we will just love each other and yes Mr. ASR if you ever even dare think of leaving this MRS.KKGSR, i swear i will strangle you!

With that she crashed her lips on his.

Arnav was shocked but then kissed her back he had dreamt of it since ages.

A breaking the kiss- kkgsr i think we should shift here

K: why

A: because no one interrupts us here we get more time and privacy here.

K: that way we will never get privacy anywhere!

A: now move in let me sleep

K: what your going to sleep here? Noway!

A: yeah i told you i cant sleep without holding your hand.

Next morning

Khushi...wake up it's late

She pulled arnav closer and snuggled closer in her sleep but she was wondering how he became so fat in one night..

Arnavji i love you

SANKA DEVI UTH RAHI HO YA NAHI NAND KISORE!

Khushi got up with a jolt! Arnav had left early morning...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dats beautiful
Loved it
Was vry nyc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice one dear... Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely and beautiful confession from arhi
loved them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww this is beautifully written... U shud write more often..
And when u do don't forget to pm me 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -sanika-

Sweetie, can you format ur first post? It is a bit hard to read with all the formatting tags!



yea sorry i had edited it from my phone thats y all the tags iv edited it again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Thats awesome dear totally loved it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was really nice dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just loved it and the ending was beautiful and hilarious.

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