OS: New Version of IPKKND... Episode 2 update!!

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Beautiful fort of Delhi is shown... People walking by, cycling around... Nice sunny day where everyone is busy in their own world doing their own stuff...

Various different forts and locations are shown until it reached Laxmi Nagar... We are zoomed to a house where 3 ladies in saree are sitting and laughing around...

Hai re Nand Kishore... you came here to visit us.. it feels like my Nand Kishore himself walked in... I'm really very happy you came from so far away... right Garima, said Madhumati.

Yes jiji... Last we met radhika jiji was about 10 years back when Payal was just 13 years old and Khushi was just 11. Radhika jiji loved both our gals like her own. But, since bhai sahab was offered job in America and they had moved there. But, its really good to see you here again after such a long time.

Haa Garima, you are right. Its been really long. My eyes have been logging to see Payal and Khushi... They must have been so grown up now and molded into beautiful and sanskari young girls. Kaha hai dono? Nazar nahi aarahi...

Hai re Nand Kishore... Khushi has not even changed a bit. She is still the same loud pagal type Sankadevi... Sahi naam rakhe tha aapne Radhikaji. Kabhi bhi uski budhi sanak jati hai. But my Payal... she is such a pure and beautiful soul. Her smile is like the rising sun in sky, her skin tone is as if milk in Kailash, her long dark hair, her simple and innocent eyes... Any guy who sees her will just keep staring... Haye re meri payaliya

Ohh ho Madhumati ji... Will you just keep praising your niece or even show me where is she so i can put nazar ka tikka on her?

All the three ladies laughed out loud. Hum yaha hai masiji... someone responded from behind.

Eelo aagayi hamari rajkumari bhatiji, payaliya. She had gone to the temple to pray for a suitable husband.

The scene zooms from her feets moving up to her hands with pooja thal... wind blowing her hair... her eyes... her wide smile... Radhikaji turned to see her and softly says... PAYAL bitiya...


Payal is shown smiling just at the door step... She walks in and bows down taking blessings from Radhikaji who were once their neighbour and also who taught her how to make beautiful decorated matkas (pots)

After some hugging and flashing back session... coming to the current moment Payal said she would get tea and some snacks for the trio. Just as she started walking toward the kitchen, Radhikaji asked... Payal bitiya, where is Khushi?

Scene moves to a high five cafe. People are having coffee and chilling around. All girls in modern outfit with guys and happening gossips. We then see a man in coat sitting talking to a girl in salwar khameez.

Dekhye, yeh five star cafe hai... aap yaha aise kapre pehenke kaam nahi ker sakti. Either you change your dressing style or you cant work here.

Scene shift to the girl: Her eyes is moving around seeing people surrounding her. She saw a waitress in short black skirt, high heels and gulp down some water. Her mouth widen up seeing the waitress flirting with a bunch of guys. Her eyes popped out seeing this. The manager got a call and said he gives her 10 minutes to think about it. (her face is yet to be shown till this point).

The manager goes away leaving this young lady thinking about what to do. She mumbles to herself... 'Naukri toh humein chaiye, babuji is in such amount of debt and i need to help him out financially. He will never allow me to help him in his shop so i should work outside and gain some cash for him... But i can't wear such clothes'.

While thinking she picked her glass to gulp down the water not realising it is empty. She then looked around trying to get someone to give her water. As she turned to her right.. she saw a waiter and said...

"hey waiter, thora paani milega".

The person stopped immediately.

His folding fingers into a punch showed level of his anger. He paused and removed his glares... his eyes fuming as if he could just light up a fire with it...

He slowly turned facing the person who had just designated him as a WAITER...



As he looked at her... he said 'WHAT THE!!!'

He couldnt see the face of the girl as she had he faced covered with her hand...

Upon hearing his words da girl got up and started blabbering..

"Arey.. kya what the what the ker rahe hai... humein pyas lagi hai... paani chaiye... aur aap toh waiter ho yaha ke toh aapka toh yeh kaam hai... na jaane kaise batameez waiters rakhe hai yaha...

He still couldnt see her face as she had bent down to pick he jhola.



Fuming eyes guy: Who the hell are you?? Tum hoti kaun ho...

Girl in Salwar: Arey... Delhi mein naya aaye ho is it? Hum KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA hai...

swing her hair away... we see her smiling face..

He kept staring at her not believing what had this lil crazy looking girl just blasted him off...

Khushi wondering why is he staring at her popped up the question immediately...


Ye Kabootar ki tarha kya ghurke dekh rahe hai.. kya humein kuch galat keh diya... aap waiter hi ho naa is cafe ke.. koi malik thori... ab jayee aur paani le aaye.. varna manager sahab se keh dhenge hum... bekar mein naukri se haath dhona parega...

That young handsome dashing young man had just walked away in anger throwing two three chairs down... (we still haven't seen his complete face)

Khushi in shocked... suddenly wondered... shayed unke ghar mein koi problem hoga isliye itne pareshan hai.. chalo rehne dheti hu... Bechare... kitne dard mein lag rahe thee... unki aakhein kitni tadap rahi thi...


Realising the motive of her being there.. she thought...

'Hum kaam toh kerna chahte hai lekin aapne aapko badal ke nahi ya aapne sanskar bhulke nahi..." With a broad smile she told herself.. arey hum toh KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA hai... chutki mein naukri mil jayegi... Jai Devi Maiya ki...

Episode ends on Khushi's broad smile...

Precap: Mera naam ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA hai... you get it!!!!!! A man in white shirt and browish vest shouting at the Cafe manager...





Please let me know how was the first part... Hope you guys like it. Comment and inspire me to write more...


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hetalmkn thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lookz like no one liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good concept!!do write more n pm me
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Good concept!!do write more n pm me :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha i love te comedy and the way kushi mistaken him for a waiter!!and u used the correct expressions for kushi!!!its awesome!!!hope to hear more of ur story!!do pm when u done!!thanks
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Thanks to those who liked it.. will surely write more and PM you guys :)
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SHURUAAT TO ACCHI HE...👏
DO write n cntinue... 😛
still need to work on Arshi part...😉( I cud b wrong..!)😆
N pm me...😃
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EPISODE 2


All the waiters are standing in a line with their heads down. Everyone looked so afraid of whats going to happen now...

One of the waiter couldn't control himself from coughing...

A man shown facing his back... camera zooms down to his hand which has now turned into a fist in anger...

The waiter tried to control but in vain... Just then we hear...

ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!! Get The Hell Out Of Here...

Everyone is shocked and standing still.. the waiter who was coughing ran out of the room.

The manager tried speaking to that man...

Sir, woh larki actually... (looking really tensed and not sure of what to say)

We hear the man saying... i asked you a simple question...

Who Was that GIRL?? (his tone went higher as he completed his sentence)

Manager tried answering it.. Sir woh larki job...

Before he could finish his sentence... the man said..

What The...😡

The manager said.. sir aap itna pareshan mat hoye.. maine usko naukri nahi dhi hai... woh actually job kerna chahti thi but i told her dressing senses doesn't suit AR cafe's standard...

Just then the man turns and is shown from his shoes till his eyes...

his eyes turning red in anger... after a minute of silence...

mera naam ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA hai...!!! aur aaj tak kisi ki himmat nahi huvi meri aakho mein dekh ke baat kerne ki and she called me a waiter...

While he walked up and down.. he suddenly stopped and stare at the manager...

the poor manager gulp down in fear... sir.. woh.. humne... kuch..

Arnav then said.. toh woh naukri keliye aayi thi... hmmm.. he had a smirk on his face... He tell the manager something in silence mode... the manager was shock hearing it.. but eventually said.. Yes Sir.. main karunga...

Arnav taps his shoulder and says... GOOD..

but remember... if you don't do it.. you will lose your job.

Manager hold Arnav's leg and said.. nahi sir.. aap aisa mat kijeye... mere 2 chotte bache hai sir..

Arnav standing still said.. I DONT CARE!!

Yeh dunyia aur iss dunyia ke log sab bohot matlabi hai... Koi kisi ka kuch bhala nahi ker sakta...

He closed his eyes in pain... and went into flashback mode..

A young boy in his early teens knocking on a door... a lady dressed in wedding clothes open the doors... He says..

Di... baraat aagayi hai... Aap bohot sundar lag rahe ho.. Jijayi toh fida hojayenge... hahahah

The bride giggled and said.. shhh shaitan.. jaye chhote Aama ki madat kerye... aapne jijayi ka swagat kerye...

The young boy smile and went looking for his mom... He entered a room and saw something and screamed!!! MAAA...

Arnav snaps out of his dream... his eyes red... his hand in fist form... he was shivering from head to toe... His eyes moist... he quickly wore his shades and walked away from the manager...

The manager said to himself.. Maaf kerna sister... but i have 2 kids and for them i have to do as I'm told... I'm SORRY ... Episode ends on his face..

Precap: Postman: Khushi Gupta kaun hai...
Khushi answers: Aarey... hum itne bare aapko dikh nahi rahe hai... Kyaa kaam hai??
Postman: Yeh aapke naam ki chitti...letter..
Khushi: Huh????



Sorry for a late update... I wanted to be really free to come up with the next part... I hope you guys like it... Please comment and encourage me to write more...

I know there are many other OS or FF... I'm not competing with anyone... Just writing my version of IPKKND... ;)
Edited by hetalmkn - 13 years ago
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nice...do continue...and plz dont take too long 😊
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mmm what did ASR SAY TO THE MAN!!!!!!i hope its not sooo bad!!!!!!!!bdw lovely update...waiting for the next part!!!

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