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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1

Here for Leah , Ritzy & Sarra ...


A BROKEN STRING OF PEARLS

"Faith is the silver thread upon which the pearls of the graces are to be hung. Break that, and you have broken the string ' the pearls lie scattered on the ground." ~ Charles H. Spurgeon (Nineteenth Century English Preacher)

This is a story of a brother & sister .. a brother & sister who were abandoned .. a brother & sister .. who clung to each other for emotional support .. a brother & sister who fought & made a life for themselves . a brother & sister who promised to be there for each other through thick & thin '

Then came the "significant other" in their lives ..

The Sisters Husband: The Sister got her Dream on a platter served by her brother ..

the sister got a husband who created a perfect illusion for her .. a husband whose very voice was the sweetest syrup which would sweeten her heart & palate .. a husband who never stepped out of line .. a husband who showered her love bought by her brother ' a husband who served her savouries bought by the brother '. A husband who never gave a single thing to the wife not bought by the brother '' a husband who only maintained an illusion of husband ' because in his MIND & HEART '. She was not a WIFE .. but a MEAL TICKET '

Then a significant other was forced into the life of the brother ..

The brother once again to maintain his sisters Dream married a woman who was the reason his sisters illusion could be over

The Brother's wife .. was hurtled into marriage ' she never had a day of happiness with the man .. she dint ever get a sweet word from the man' she never took anything from the man .. she bore his hatred with a smile on her face .. she bore his anger with a smile on her face .. she bore his rants with a smile on her face ' because in her HEART & MIND ' she was his WIFE ..he was her HUSBAND '.. & he was her LOVE

Then came the BIG BANG the illusion broke .. for both the brother & sister '

The sister was rudely jolted out of her illusion to which she is desparately clinging '. A sister who wants to live in the past .. a sister who clings to her past ' A sister .. WHO WANTS HER PAST

The borther was clobbered on his head & his illusion was smashed ' an illusion which when broke .. brought him to his knees .. an illusion when shattered .. took along his arrogance & his Hate .. a brother who will now do anything to change his past .. a brother who will do anyting to right his past mistakes .. a brother WHO WILL DO ANYTHING TO NO GO INTO THE PAST '


The dichotomy called Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon ...


Title so justified .. congratulations GUL KHAN .. the growing TRPs are a testament to your fantastic talent of story telling ...

Ruby,
this is fantastic!👏

I hope more is coming from you in the next Redux thread of today's epi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1

Here for Leah , Ritzy & Sarra ...


A BROKEN STRING OF PEARLS

"Faith is the silver thread upon which the pearls of the graces are to be hung. Break that, and you have broken the string ' the pearls lie scattered on the ground." ~ Charles H. Spurgeon (Nineteenth Century English Preacher)

This is a story of a brother & sister .. a brother & sister who were abandoned .. a brother & sister .. who clung to each other for emotional support .. a brother & sister who fought & made a life for themselves . a brother & sister who promised to be there for each other through thick & thin '

Then came the "significant other" in their lives ..

The Sisters Husband: The Sister got her Dream on a platter served by her brother ..

the sister got a husband who created a perfect illusion for her .. a husband whose very voice was the sweetest syrup which would sweeten her heart & palate .. a husband who never stepped out of line .. a husband who showered her love bought by her brother ' a husband who served her savouries bought by the brother '. A husband who never gave a single thing to the wife not bought by the brother '' a husband who only maintained an illusion of husband ' because in his MIND & HEART '. She was not a WIFE .. but a MEAL TICKET '

Then a significant other was forced into the life of the brother ..

The brother once again to maintain his sisters Dream married a woman who was the reason his sisters illusion could be over

The Brother's wife .. was hurtled into marriage ' she never had a day of happiness with the man .. she dint ever get a sweet word from the man' she never took anything from the man .. she bore his hatred with a smile on her face .. she bore his anger with a smile on her face .. she bore his rants with a smile on her face ' because in her HEART & MIND ' she was his WIFE ..he was her HUSBAND '.. & he was her LOVE

Then came the BIG BANG the illusion broke .. for both the brother & sister '

The sister was rudely jolted out of her illusion to which she is desparately clinging '. A sister who wants to live in the past .. a sister who clings to her past ' A sister .. WHO WANTS HER PAST

The borther was clobbered on his head & his illusion was smashed ' an illusion which when broke .. brought him to his knees .. an illusion when shattered .. took along his arrogance & his Hate .. a brother who will now do anything to change his past .. a brother who will do anyting to right his past mistakes .. a brother WHO WILL DO ANYTHING TO NO GO INTO THE PAST '


The dichotomy called Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon ...


Title so justified .. congratulations GUL KHAN .. the growing TRPs are a testament to your fantastic talent of story telling ...

Too good ruby👏

Loved it...especially kushis ellobaration..wonderfully put..take a bow madam!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1

Here for Leah , Ritzy & Sarra ...


A BROKEN STRING OF PEARLS

"Faith is the silver thread upon which the pearls of the graces are to be hung. Break that, and you have broken the string ' the pearls lie scattered on the ground." ~ Charles H. Spurgeon (Nineteenth Century English Preacher)

This is a story of a brother & sister .. a brother & sister who were abandoned .. a brother & sister .. who clung to each other for emotional support .. a brother & sister who fought & made a life for themselves . a brother & sister who promised to be there for each other through thick & thin '

Then came the "significant other" in their lives ..

The Sisters Husband: The Sister got her Dream on a platter served by her brother ..

the sister got a husband who created a perfect illusion for her .. a husband whose very voice was the sweetest syrup which would sweeten her heart & palate .. a husband who never stepped out of line .. a husband who showered her love bought by her brother ' a husband who served her savouries bought by the brother '. A husband who never gave a single thing to the wife not bought by the brother '' a husband who only maintained an illusion of husband ' because in his MIND & HEART '. She was not a WIFE .. but a MEAL TICKET '

Then a significant other was forced into the life of the brother ..

The brother once again to maintain his sisters Dream married a woman who was the reason his sisters illusion could be over

The Brother's wife .. was hurtled into marriage ' she never had a day of happiness with the man .. she dint ever get a sweet word from the man' she never took anything from the man .. she bore his hatred with a smile on her face .. she bore his anger with a smile on her face .. she bore his rants with a smile on her face ' because in her HEART & MIND ' she was his WIFE ..he was her HUSBAND '.. & he was her LOVE

Then came the BIG BANG the illusion broke .. for both the brother & sister '

The sister was rudely jolted out of her illusion to which she is desparately clinging '. A sister who wants to live in the past .. a sister who clings to her past ' A sister .. WHO WANTS HER PAST

The borther was clobbered on his head & his illusion was smashed ' an illusion which when broke .. brought him to his knees .. an illusion when shattered .. took along his arrogance & his Hate .. a brother who will now do anything to change his past .. a brother who will do anyting to right his past mistakes .. a brother WHO WILL DO ANYTHING TO NO GO INTO THE PAST '


The dichotomy called Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon ...


Title so justified .. congratulations GUL KHAN .. the growing TRPs are a testament to your fantastic talent of story telling ...

Wow ruby... Superb... Amazing... U need to post this in the next redux...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry Ruby for the trouble but can u pls explain the last bold para...nahin zhepa mujhe...😭

and also in today's Redux, pls put the bro-sis part which u mentioned somewhere...Thanks darling😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1

Here for Leah , Ritzy & Sarra ...


A BROKEN STRING OF PEARLS

"Faith is the silver thread upon which the pearls of the graces are to be hung. Break that, and you have broken the string ' the pearls lie scattered on the ground." ~ Charles H. Spurgeon (Nineteenth Century English Preacher)

This is a story of a brother & sister .. a brother & sister who were abandoned .. a brother & sister .. who clung to each other for emotional support .. a brother & sister who fought & made a life for themselves . a brother & sister who promised to be there for each other through thick & thin '

Then came the "significant other" in their lives ..

The Sisters Husband: The Sister got her Dream on a platter served by her brother ..

the sister got a husband who created a perfect illusion for her .. a husband whose very voice was the sweetest syrup which would sweeten her heart & palate .. a husband who never stepped out of line .. a husband who showered her love bought by her brother ' a husband who served her savouries bought by the brother '. A husband who never gave a single thing to the wife not bought by the brother '' a husband who only maintained an illusion of husband ' because in his MIND & HEART '. She was not a WIFE .. but a MEAL TICKET '

Then a significant other was forced into the life of the brother ..

The brother once again to maintain his sisters Dream married a woman who was the reason his sisters illusion could be over

The Brother's wife .. was hurtled into marriage ' she never had a day of happiness with the man .. she dint ever get a sweet word from the man' she never took anything from the man .. she bore his hatred with a smile on her face .. she bore his anger with a smile on her face .. she bore his rants with a smile on her face ' because in her HEART & MIND ' she was his WIFE ..he was her HUSBAND '.. & he was her LOVE

Then came the BIG BANG the illusion broke .. for both the brother & sister '

The sister was rudely jolted out of her illusion to which she is desparately clinging '. A sister who wants to live in the past .. a sister who clings to her past ' A sister .. WHO WANTS HER PAST

The borther was clobbered on his head & his illusion was smashed ' an illusion which when broke .. brought him to his knees .. an illusion when shattered .. took along his arrogance & his Hate .. a brother who will now do anything to change his past .. a brother who will do anyting to right his past mistakes .. a brother WHO WILL DO ANYTHING TO NO GO INTO THE PAST '


The dichotomy called Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon ...


Title so justified .. congratulations GUL KHAN .. the growing TRPs are a testament to your fantastic talent of story telling ...



Lovely !!! 👏👏

I reserved a spot for you in the next redux... u better reserve one for you and post this beautiful piece !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: joenet1234

Ruby - meherbaani kar kay PM chak karain.. bohat khichdi pakai hai main nay😃


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pals13


Pallu i will not be posting at redux ... but yeh tum logon ke liye khaas tha .. wil be here to chat with all though ..

@ Bold: is adultery the biggest crime of SHYAM's ... to me he was a bought for person by ASR to keep his sisters life happy .. . everything the man did he did with ASR money ... he was with Anjali for ASR money ...
an illusion like this had to go sour ... it had to rot .. coz the basic nature of the person is to CHEAT & to SPONGE OFF ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Today's episode proved one point.

"You hurt the person you love the most"
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb post Ruby... loved it 👏

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