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redwine1

@redwine1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#801

Hi Ruby...need your explanation in this one...I know he has to maintain the two relationships now...but by slapping snake...hasn't he already chosen Khushi over Anjali...that's what I felt...in no way will he choose Anjali over Khushi this time...Khushi might walk out unable to bear his pain...she is selfless

Priya ... i have a bit of a problem .. seeing the leads separated .. ( i know its a distinct possibility) ... but as off now i dont see the need for it .. remember u have had 45 days without the leads together ,,, 45 days in serial time is huge ... tracks can change .. lets say they decide to show a GREY anjali & that does not take well with audience .. they will scrap it ...

AS a woman i would be highly disturbed by yet another sacrifice for Khushi .. see how the public reacted to humiliation on friday .. now if she sacrifices & leaves ..public can again roar ...

By slapping Shyam ...he slapped the guy who dared to Cheat his Di .. he slapped the guy .. who is lying to his Di .. he slapped the guy ..who is committing adultery against his Di .. ( & thats the FIRST SLAP) ...

Then he slapped him for the humiliation that he caused his wife ...

Khushi has risen in position .. but is nearly at par ... definitely not over his Di ... as off now ..

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twisted_beenz

@twisted_beenz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: mommamia

🤗🤗 Proud of you bitiya!! Keep going..

Credit would go to you maate... you listened and that is the biggest help one can give...

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iritz

@iritz

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Okay darling... lets start from the beginning... (Where is Nia... my scene writing partner)

They enter the room... finally !!!

The first thing... even before the bathing...

They both are shaken up badly with the events of the day... He enters the room after putting Di to sleep... Khushi already there... standing by the pool (SUPNA... yeh pool waala scene is just for you my love)... looking at the stars with moist eyes... she feels his presence and turns around...

He is shaken to the core, more because of Anjali than so because of his own kidnapping and attempted murder. A broken man... she moves towards him to console him... but before she is able to say anything... he makes her sit down on the couch and he sits on the table next to it (ideally I would want him to sit besides her on the floor... but I can't see ASR sitting on the floor)...

************

He takes her hand in his... and says...

"Khushi... I'm sorry... I'm so sorry !"

Khushi, with tears flowing out of her eyes... "Nahi Arnav ji, aap humse maafi mat maangiye, isme aapki koi galti nahi thi"

"Sshhh... Khushi, let me speak today... I'm sorry I didn't believe you earlier. I'm sorry, I believed Shyam over you... I'm sorry for forcing you to marry me.. I'm so..."

"Nahi Arnav ji" cupping his face in her palms, Khushi goes on, "jaane dijiye ab in sab baaton ko, jo hona tha ho gaya, is waqt humein sirf Di ke baare mein sochna hai"

Arnav looks at her with eyes filled with tears of love and pride...
...

((Shall I??))

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Rupunzale

@Rupunzale

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: amarb
Ruby...Zara Socho iss bare mein...we know Anjali can be manipulative when she wants to...but this time Asr won't accept it...kya Kehna?

We are talking about anji and ASR... ASR will do whatever anji says...

Beena...he will not bring Shyam back for Anji anymore...he threw him out on the first place...now Khushi is in the equation...he declared that by making her stand in the same pedestal as Anji...things will be different...for him, he attempted murder...right?

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meghavn

@meghavn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: mommamia

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🤣🤣🤣
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I told me husband .. till ASR covers himself up.. Dont come any where near me with your vest.. he was giving me WHAT THE expressions.. 😆😆

😆 😆 😆 ur poor husband...

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365166

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: amarb

Credit would go to you maate... you listened and that is the biggest help one can give...

Hey common.. Wait for my post tomorrow.. you will get an answer... suffice to say Redux babes rock..

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twisted_beenz

@twisted_beenz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: redwine1

AS a woman i would be highly disturbed by yet another sacrifice for Khushi .. see how the public reacted to humiliation on friday .. now if she sacrifices & leaves ..public can again roar ...

Then he slapped him for the humiliation that he caused his wife ...

Khushi has risen in position .. but is nearly at par ... definitely not over his Di ... as off now ..

Chandni... anji going grey according to me would be a bad move... They can show that she gives cold shoulder etc but not out and out grey... Her characterization is not potrayed that way and audience will not connect with the grey character

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sunshine99

@sunshine99

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: redwine1

Ruby nicely explained... I saw friday as another warning from ASR to Shyam and his establishment for all that he is their surksha Kavach from now on officially... but if he were Harvard brain he would have removed the serpents fangs and left him totally with only the ability to try to frighten without being actually being able to do so. Shyam has already done the extreme that he could do to Khushi he nearly killed her... morally and emotionally tore her to shreds ... so anything else he does from now on will be a repetition... As ASR is hindi serial ka hero he will now only roar like a lion now and finally embark on the cheetah act the next time when the trademark O expression on everyone face is of the perfect size.😆

So my expectation from him like a normal serial wala hero is to give a few punches to Shyamoo when he tries to wiggle into RM with Anji looking on with tears...then she can visit the clinic for abortion...

C the Harvard brain .. will come into play ... c like last time .. he gave him a warning & showed him who is boss .. by cutting the money supply ...

Now he will plan ... at least i HOPE he will ... there shud be something up his sleeve other than the slap ... ( oh sorry something else up his dirty vest ) ...

As I mentioned to Trin yesterday I thought so too the jailwala dialogue was not aivayee... ASR does not just say or do anything without being able to back it up... but I am as usual bordering on cautious enthusiasm bcoz CV's tend to change the course of the story and character actions often

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vasiraju

@vasiraju

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: meghavn

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me cant control laughter 🤣 my dad is sitting in front of me in his vest having dinner...

OMG i can't stop laugh ..I am happy that my hubby don't wares any vest ..he uses only t shirts ..

nahi tho i would have scold him taking out my frustartion on ASR dirty vest

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meghavn

@meghavn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#810

Originally posted by: iritz

Okay darling... lets start from the beginning... (Where is Nia... my scene writing partner)

They enter the room... finally !!!

The first thing... even before the bathing...

They both are shaken up badly with the events of the day... He enters the room after putting Di to sleep... Khushi already there... standing by the pool (SUPNA... yeh pool waala scene is just for you my love)... looking at the stars with moist eyes... she feels his presence and turns around...

He is shaken to the core, more because of Anjali than so because of his own kidnapping and attempted murder. A broken man... she moves towards him to console him... but before she is able to say anything... he makes her sit down on the couch and he sits on the table next to it (ideally I would want him to sit besides her on the floor... but I can't see ASR sitting on the floor)...

************

He takes her hand in his... and says...

"Khushi... I'm sorry... I'm so sorry !"

Khushi, with tears flowing out of her eyes... "Nahi Arnav ji, aap humse maafi mat maangiye, isme aapki koi galti nahi thi"

"Sshhh... Khushi, let me speak today... I'm sorry I didn't believe you earlier. I'm sorry, I believed Shyam over you... I'm sorry for forcing you to marry me.. I'm so..."

"Nahi Arnav ji" cupping his face in her palms, Khushi goes on, "jaane dijiye ab in sab baaton ko, jo hona tha ho gaya, is waqt humein sirf Di ke baare mein sochna hai"

Arnav looks at her with eyes filled with tears of love and pride...
...

((Shall I??))