I hated the sex scenes in 50 shades. It was written in such a crude, vulger manner (even his so called vanilla sex scenes) i mostly skipped them. Actually overall the launguage used in the book, sucked big time.But yes now that book rocked!
Oh god yes, the language! The woman either didn't have a vast vocabulary bank or perhaps she ran out of it repeating her scenes again and again. But hey she proved that sex sells and not god literature. Pity people miss out on some wonderful piece of writing.
Hiru I can't make up my mind whether she deliberately wrote so crassly about those intimate scens because C is a pervert and he doesn't has the finesse in him or was it James's lack of creativity!